Reviews For A Series of Wishes
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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 6:35 AM Title: Anywhere Butt Here

The wish gone wrong concept is one of my favorite concepts for wrapping stories around.  Would love to see some of these wishes result in inanimate or body part transformations.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 6:16 AM Title: Anywhere Butt Here

Great stuff.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2020 6:13 PM Title: Trapped On Campus

Was not expecting that twist in the last chapter! Hope to keep seeing more!

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 9:02 PM Title: Trapped On Campus

So glad I saw these! The first one was great, the second?

Amazing!

I loved how he slowly realises that he's screwed. The poster alteration was really nice touch too.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 4:00 PM Title: Trapped On Campus

Thanks for your response. I like slow shrink but I have in mind for one of your one-shots. The son or brother is shrunk to 6 inches, then the stink starts to shrink him. That way, the cruel breaking of him, mind, body, and spirit from female foot stink, can happen faster. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 11:11 AM Title: A Son's Wish

I bet he never imagined that "one day" could be a day in the past - good job!

 

PS

Does anyone know of other stories with multiple layers of socks/stockings? I can only remember one atm by Ace Jack (+ a video by business girls's feet fyi).

I'm especially interested if a tiny ends up between two layers of course :)

 



Author's Response:

Ay thanks dawg, and ya idk why it isn't used to often. I see multiple sock layers used a lot but nylons can smell so much worse.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 11:07 AM Title: Trapped On Campus

Pete gasped - does anybody else see those weird characters at the beginning of both chapters?


I did absolutely enjoy something shorter, especially considering that wishing can lead to all kinds of stories! My only complaint here is that if Olivia drinks him she'll get back to being bored...



Author's Response:

Ya the characters just kinda show up when I upload the file but eh, if it's only at the beginning I don't mind. Also ya I was trying more to imply just abusing him in her mouth but after reading it back I saw it could be seen as swallowing him. I just figured if I put implied mouthplay at the beginning it would be fine. Still glad you somewhat enjoyed it though.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 1:05 AM Title: Trapped On Campus

I love your stories, especially ones that have pungent, crusty socks breaking little sons and brothers. I'd love a short story of a son or brother who keeps shrinking from the smell of feet and socks. It'd be awesome to read about his mind breaking and just being smeared in feminine foot stink and grime until he became the very filth he was smelling. 



Author's Response:

I can for sure see another son or brother thing in the future, also a slow shrinking like that isn't a bad idea.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 1:00 AM Title: Trapped On Campus

I loved the first 2 stories! Love fort torture/humiliation from wishes gone wrong! Continue please!!!



Author's Response:

It's definitely possible, well have to see where the ideas lead me.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2020 5:24 AM Title: Trapped On Campus

This sounds awesome! I kinda like this shorter ones too. Cant wait for more of this series. Thanks for the awesome story



Author's Response:

Thanks dawg, glad you like the shorter form!

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