Reviews For Subjugation
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Reviewer: monsterhunter22 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2020 6:40 PM Title: Destruction

I love your stories so much. Especially with the elves. Another fantastic story. I would love to know how the war got started and how elves got magic. Have you seen the dragon prince on Netflix? Great show with humans and elf's at war. Your story reminds me of that if the elf's won. 



Author's Response:

Why thank you! Happy to hear you enjoyed! The story that comes after this, Rulership, has some of that lore you are curious about. Though fair warning that story is pretty much Mxf. Also I can't say I've seen it but will add it to the watch list!

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2020 10:54 AM Title: Destruction

This has been an absolutely wonderful story from start to finish. The characters were ineresting and engaging, they had meaningful arcs, the world building was lovely and it led to a wonderful end. Truly fantastic!

-Jess



Author's Response:

Why thank you! It was lovely to write, hope the next one is also engaging.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2020 8:17 PM Title: Destruction

Just finished this story and dang, this is a pretty interesting world you have here.  personally i'm less fond of the psychological bits but the whole "beautiful elves who are better than humans in every way reduce humans to a tiny animal species' is pretty hot.  Their shrunken victims might think "the elves are so pretty and perfect, how can they do these terrible things?"  Even when being eaten they might admire the elf's mouth before they get gulped.

I'd like to see the Empress and her thoughts on all this and any royal family members too.  Perhaps there could be a duality too?  Like elves who treasure and love their pets but act cruel to other humans sort of thing.

I quite liked "Loving Arms' because it showed that not every elf is cruel or indifferent but even the nice ones maintain a position of superority over humans.  I look forward to the sequal!



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed! Pleased you find the concept as lewd as I do as well, giant elves is certainly one of the tops for me. Hopefully whenever I finish the sequel you find yourself enjoying that was well!

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2020 3:48 PM Title: Destruction

So not only is this an absolute masterclass in writing and conflict development as well as world-building, but it's also extremely solid size smut with character interactions that feel real and poignant. To the end I still couldn't decide whether I wanted Rickard to keep hold of his humanity or just submit and be Nalista's personal toy forever.

You continue to be one of the best writers in this fetish and if you had a ko-fi site or something I would easily make donations or do whatever I could to help you keep sharing your stories with us! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll take that as a compliment since a lot of the time people just want the small to submit and give it all up for the smut! Always nice I think to have people behind the size.

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2020 11:30 AM Title: Destruction

Really enjoyed the story and the characters. I'm lacking time for a full review, but I loved this story.



Author's Response:

Not a problem, happy to hear you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 10:53 PM Title: Destruction

A very well written story and - what I find more important - a really good story. The fetish inserts were probably my least favourite parts of it, seemed unnecessary on more than one occasion. The main characters were amazing though, and their interactions perfect.

I do not like to review the plots of the stories I read or comment them (as they belong to their respective Authors and Authors alone), though I am willing to make an exception here. The ending made me feel quite sad; it seems Rickard truly loved Nalista, maybe more than anyone ever did before him, but Nalista, being a product of a society she was, failed to recognize it and brought him to the verge of insanity (though whether he crossed the threshold remains uncertain). Tragic tale set in a world of full of animosities and strife, but one that makes me miss the characters already.



Author's Response:

Very happy to hear you enjoyed it! It was quite fun to write! I try to approach things from a story angle first, the world being what it is allows me to insert size as being basically just a way of life here. I try to make it a seamless blend but sometimes doesn't work out so well.

Its a tragic thing really. The two of them probably could have been great friends and even more, if they weren't in the world they live in. Their dynamic was fun to write honestly and I'm happy to hear you took some feelings away from it, even if it was sad.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 9:06 PM Title: Destruction

It was then that Rose won the battle against himself. He loved Nalista.



Author's Response:

What a long fought battle, but he came around in the end. To the true way.

Reviewer: ikkle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 9:03 PM Title: Destruction

One of my favorite stories on this website!

(story spoilers ahead)

 

With this, the final chapter, I think Nalista is accurate in her statement that it's something that has been put in motion.  Even if the empress isn't that personally pissed off about it, she has to give the elves a show of strength to reassure them that they aren't going to be sacked by the next campaign.

Of course, people don't usually respond to shows of force like this by giving up, so future humans will probably do their best to resist all the same.

What really set this apart from some of your other stories for me was the plentiful backstories for both Nalista and Rickard.  Even if my primary motivation for reading was smug elf feet, it's always better with characters who feel real, as opposed to just being afterthoughts (though I apprecited the random side characters too.)



Author's Response:

I enjoyed writing both of them as well! They had some lovely back and forth to write and honestly I just wanted to touch on the conflicts that happen in the world as opposed to looking strictly in the elven heartlands. Hopefully the story I'm writing after will live up to the same!

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