[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 8:33 AM Title: Natural Order
Oh my, what a pleasant read! A rare treat endeed! I rarely leave reviews but... Your way of writing the New world order stuff is truly great! No matter if we're talking about this story or the other ones.
And... Gotta say i understand and partially agree with the elven PoV about the whole "lesser species" idea. Humans were doomed right from the start. Since the very moment the elves established their own empire and started conquering nearby countries.
Why? Because of humaninty's greed and stupidity of course!
Instead of fighting over a pieces of land here or there and holding grudges against each other, they should've combined the strength of all kingdoms. Rally an army of 100000 and show the elves what's "The wrath of humanity" is all about.
Politically wise, creating such an alliance while facing common enemy wasn't too hard. Invading Elsira from the different sides wasn't too hard either, but they failed to do so. They fought alone and fell one by one instead.
When the elves gained foothold other continents, humans failed to drive them back, or at least cut the sea supply paths. What were the fleets doing?
And now for the main question: after all this decades (or perhaps even centuries) of war... WHY TH F*CK are they still trying to face FAR bigger and stronger opponents in melee combat instead of shifting their focus to magic, ranged weapons and war machinery? Do they need an english longbowman back from 1346 to show them how it's done?
So... The humans can't be pitied. They brought this upon themselves and will eventually suffer for their ignorance...
Well... That's enough about the humanity, let's get back to the story.
I love the power dynamics here and sincerely hope Dalia won't be able to "correct" prince. At least not without breaking the Grand Generals orders.
Let's see if our little prince will do well enough to be personally trained by Nalista. His resistance may even pique her interest further... She had her breath taken by him not long ago, she deserves the best pet, and the "Black rose" deserves the best mistress! After she breaks him in of course...
P.S. I'm truly sorry about my poor english... It's not my native language after all...
Author's Response:
Hey, not a problem at all! Happy you are enjoying the story. There are humans like Rickard that do try to adapt but its rather a case of too little too late at this point! Such a terrible pity.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 2:42 AM Title: Natural Order
This chapter is my favorite kind of thing to be honest. Prestigious, beautiful women having tiny people serve their feet in dominant, casual, strict, but gentle (relative to how cruel size content can get) ways.
It's still mixed with the unfairness of the situation, and of course, being stuck in it for life would be hell. If only it could be like, a summer program...
Anyways, great chapter! Being used as a sandal strap is criminally underutilized!
Author's Response:
Its a delight to be sure! I'm a sucker for scenes where the smug ladies just prop their feet up and the implicit command is basically there. Very delightful stuff.
A nice vacation destination but not so much where one is gonna set up a house, I can totally get that.
Date: September 20 2020 2:35 AM Title: Natural Order
Damn, I knew the humans were going to lose. On devianart you mentioned that the Elsiran Empire was a magitek Roman Empire, I can see. The Romans used to march and humiliate worthy enemies like they did with Rickard.
Any chance of the elves ever getting comuppance?
And I also wanted to ask, are you going to finish If,Than?
Author's Response:
Closest equivilent is a magitek Roman Empire yep! The poor dear, tried so very hard. War is a cruel thing truly.
In stories that I write, very very very unlikely. They might have moments of stumbling but the point of the setting is in the name really. Humanity's Downfall.
I don't know, probably not? I tend to write whatever I have the spark of inspiration for at the time.