[Report This]Date: September 23 2020 12:08 AM Title: Misdirection
Well... My limited knowledge of english may not be enough to express my thoughts, but i will try anyway.
It's probably the first time the story on this site left me with such... conflicted feelings. And your worldbuilding... Really... At some point i even caught myself thinking "I want to live in this world! I want to dedicate my whole being into stopping the elven onslaught by all means necessary! And see for myself if this humanity, myself included, is fit for survival or doomed to brought under heel. Yeah, that would've been a real trial of skill and wit..."
Not your usual thoughts after reading a story on giantessworld, huh?
Well, anyway, i'm happy we're getting a sequel. I'm really excited to see if prince will find that "lifelong paradise in servitude after crossing the waves of despair" Nalista was talking about. There's saying "Once you're at the very bottom, the only way you can move is up". Rickard did everyting in his power and was ready to give up his life for Albar, let's see if he'll devote himself for his new mistress with same resolve...
And speaking about Nalista... I may be mistaken, but... I think she cares for her "Black Rose" more than she will admit, at least for now. (Of course! An exalted hero of Elsira cant have any feelings towards a lesser being! Yeah, sure...) In that bedroom scene when Dalia almost swallow Rickard, among other things like arousal and annoyance, Nalista felt fear. What was that? Fear of losing her new toy? Or fear of loosing something more? I really hope the sequel will have this moment covered.
I think that's it for now! And once again, thank you for bringing us this piece of art.
Author's Response:
I think I got the general gist of it! I sorta want to make my worlds feel detailed and real enough for people to either get invested in or at the very least give them a good picture. How I've built out worlds has developed over the years. So there is a clear line between the stories I first wrote in the setting and this one I think. Hopefully an improved one! That worldbuilding sometimes generates some powerful feelings of defiance evidently!
I'm really happy you enjoyed reading through the story!
Date: September 21 2020 1:24 PM Title: Misdirection
loving the story but i have one question. are the elves only amazon height but shrink the humans? im kinda confused.
Author's Response:
Correct, the shortest elf is usually around 6 feet tall while their taller specimens are 8-9 feet tall on average. Humans are all shrunken when captured by the Empire.
Date: September 19 2020 6:07 PM Title: Misdirection
It's a shame humanity doesn't have a balancing factor in the war. If this is a sequel to the rest of the Humanity's Downfall series it seems like this is humanity's last stand. A dedicated mage circle or a divinly choosen skilled human mage could've dragged this out or leveled the field. The god's have turned a blind eye to this pitiable world if the balance can be skewed so strongly to a cruel race, beyond revenge and into madness and depravity.
Author's Response:
A very unfair conflict to be certain, just a case of being vastly outclassed by a superior enemy in every way. Also, one might say either the gods don't care or are fine with it. I wouldn't call it a sequel, just another thing happening in the world.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2020 1:54 PM Title: Misdirection
These stories are always an emotional roller coaster. The hotness of being commodified by beautiful elves contrasted with the reality of how cruel and unfair the whole thing actually is.
Love this story as with your others. I think I found a typo:
The Zweihander elite infantry that Albar was feared for among its neighbors.
Either the "for" isn't supposed to be there or they're feared for something that is absent.
Aside from that small hiccup, love the story, and love having some elves get theirs, even if we know how it ends.
Author's Response:
That is the struggle isn't it? On the one hand, hyper lewd big elf dominance. On the other hand, the sheer unfair despair of it all. Its a lovely mixed feeling and if you enjoy that I think you'll rather enjoy this one.
Also, thanks for pointing that out! Completely missed it on my read back through.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2020 9:53 PM Title: Misdirection
Another wonderful entrty, thank you! A promising first chapter that has me curious and eager to read more. Excited to see what you have lined up!
-Jess
Author's Response:
Should be a good time I hope! I certainly enjoyed writing it, a good return to the setting hopefully.