Date: September 23 2020 4:33 AM Title: A Surprisingly Simple Solution
Hot damn, this is the best chapter yet. Besides the A+ physical descriptions, the domme aspects are so soft but so insurmountable. I appreciate that the humiliation aspects are primarily from living in his own head, while she simply gives him the powerful choice - suck or starve. Too many stories with these themes go full on infantilization, and I like this unique, knowing approach. The "darling" at the end is a very nice touch, placed where it could as easily be chiding mockery or slip of passion. Minor note tho - are you writing this on a phone? A bit of wonky autocorrect going on.
Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the very positive review! Yes, I'm writing on my phone mostly which leads to many basic spelling and grammar issues, and there's a limit to the number of times I'm willing to proofread (;
If anyone spots any mistakes like that, please leave a review for me! I will delete the review after I fix the issue, but it really helps me out!
Date: September 22 2020 8:48 PM Title: A Surprisingly Simple Solution
Awesome story, gives just the right mix of everything. Very well written.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad to hear there's a point to writing it!