[Report This]Date: June 02 2009 3:08 PM Title: Damper
Oh god, this story is shaping up to be fantastic!
And Heidi living in greg's dollhouse, that's hot!
[Report This]Date: June 02 2009 11:03 AM Title: Damper
Wow! And, I thought MY sub-plots could get Machiavellian!
So, where to start? Perhaps, that tantalizing bit about Greg's friends and family. Has Parvati given them a case of "...Wonderful Life?" I.e, Greg was never born? Nah! That kind of massive mind-wiping would probably have been noticed by the Head Witches.
So, I'll guess a magically forged note that claims he eloped to the South Seas (or something to that effect).
Then, there's Heidi's statement that some Head Witches "loathe that rule about owning humans." Does this mean some of them have a kinky domineering side (like Lily, or this newcomer Irene)? And, they wouldn't hate seeing that rule repealed? Might they even be planning an Aurora Realm coup d'etat?
I can only hope the next brilliant chapter provides some answers to these agonizing questions.
Date: May 21 2009 3:00 PM Title: Aurora Envoy
"so I don't think you have to worry about him humping Heidi's feet."
that actually made me laugh out loud.
Great to have the story updated, great chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2009 2:00 PM Title: Aurora Envoy
"His mouth is almost as bad as yours."
Lol! I have a feeling NOBODY is more smart-mouthed than Trish. Great characterization, as usual.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2009 6:11 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter
Ths story is wonderful. Great job i'd love to see you expand on it or a topic like it.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2009 12:13 PM Title: Resolution
Hmmmmmm! Will Heidi discover Little Greg and confiscate him for herself? Could she actually be Lily in disguise (with diamonds)? Tune into chapter 1 of volume 2 for the answers.
Same unpredictable time/same unpredictable channel.
Date: March 15 2009 9:14 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter
Yeah! Thanks crimson, this chapter was different, but still nice to be updated.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was, wasn't it? This chapter was pretty much filler, since I opted to stray from the Lily storyline for now and return the story's tone back to the more light-hearted one from the earlier chapters.
But thanks for reading. :)
[Report This]Date: March 11 2009 3:48 PM Title: Scavenger Hunt
Hey, TinyMan! It finally arrived.
Could I hear an "Alleulia/Amen?"
Date: March 07 2009 8:14 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter
chapter 8 coming anytime soon? :(
i really like this story
Author's Response: I'm working on it right now. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: January 27 2009 9:04 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter
Very nice! I love the new chapter you just added. The writing is fluid and the story is solid. Keep it up!
Date: October 23 2008 7:40 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter
This story has the makings of a classic. The descriptions are vivid and the plot is interesting.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2008 11:48 AM Title: Challenge
Tantalizing chapter! It reminded me of another "Greg" who got into more serious trouble with his parents over exact words.
Hint: it was the weekly story...of a lovely lady...who was bringing up three very lovely girls...