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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 2: A New Life on Miranda's Feet.

I love it.

 

Can't go wrong with redheads on a power trip.

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: A New Life on Miranda's Feet.

The premise seems interesting, though there are a few grammatical/liguistic errors (though they can be forgiven). I do, however, hope you have an outline for the story in your head; character development and plot are all to often neglected to make room for fetish content. Please, do not fall into this trap and treat the story as a ... story first and foremost; try to make it intersting and engaging. All the best!

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