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Reviewer: TinyDave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Prologue): A Witch and her Captive.

I absolutely love this story so far. I'm a big fan of super micro shrinking stories and there just aren't enough of them on this site. I'm glad to see a writer as imaginative as you seem to be is also a fan of that sub genre. I can't wait to see more. "We shall watch your career with great interest."

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 (Prologue): A Witch and her Captive.

This is great so far. Hope we see a bit more unaware at times, maybe with Luna.

Reviewer: jenadhy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Prologue): A Witch and her Captive.

very interesting, can we see a role change in the future?  that the roles are reversed?

Reviewer: dalespale Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 (Prologue): A Witch and her Captive.

Love this. Especially how Miranda and Cherice appear so turned on by their power to shrink her to a dust mite. Will we learn about their previous victims? 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Prologue): A Witch and her Captive.

I love the idea and hope to see more. Especially when Miranda's feet sweat and a tiny drop of sweat is the size of a lake to the tiny woman! And she has to swim to shore to not drown!

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