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Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

This was so incredible hot! Gonna head to your patreon now to read more. I know there will probably a dark twist, but I really love the sweet mommy like Brooke



Author's Response:

Hey Stehlampe, thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story! <3 

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2023 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

So, so good. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying so, Stehlampe! <3 

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story but I wish there were some growing moms and milfs in here.



Author's Response:

Well, the story is going to be 99 chapters in the end, so I'm sure we'll have something like that in there eventually ;) 

Glad you like the story <3 

Reviewer: pixawave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is AMAZING! One of my favorite stories from one of my favorite authors. I'm very excited for the rest. The build up has been great, but I am enjoying that we're starting to get some more action. Thank you Joyce :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, pixawave!  Lol I don't know why I'm just seeing your comment now, 2 years later, but I really appreciate it! <3 

Reviewer: Marussia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to seeing what she does to Lucas. Great work!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

Just a silly little thing - "Sofia" vs "Sophia" (I searched for "Sofia" because I didn't remember which one she was, and I got no results because all occurrences in previous chapters have "ph" instead of "f")

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Not sure how my brain decides between stalking authors with comments or being radio silent while I read, but let me tell you (since somehow I only commented here a few seconds ago :) that this story is absolutely fenomenal!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

I confess my ignorance about electronics; computers could be mechanical or hydraulical for all I care, as long as they run my programs.

And btw, not many people know that Ada Lovelace also apparently (but not certainly) invented another construct that we programmers use a lot, the typo - https://twobithistory.org/2018/08/18/ada-lovelace-note-g.html :)

Reviewer: Elbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great story by a great writer!

Rare that we have the pleasure of such an accomplished writer creating such fantastical fetish fiction! Definitely checking out your patreo, Jocelyn...and thank you for sharing your dreams!

 

-Elbee



Author's Response:

Hi Elbee!  Thanks so much for your kind response!  I'm happy that I can write stories that you enjoy!  <3 <3 

Reviewer: Firestone Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

is this story gonna have size content? if it's up to chapter 15, maybe post enough that it's actually size fetish



Author's Response:

Haha, ohhhh yes -- this story will have PLENTY of size content.  You could join my Patreon and see, but otherwise you're just gonna have to wait ;) 

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, CW! <3 <3 

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