




Date: April 27 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is AMAZING! One of my favorite stories from one of my favorite authors. I'm very excited for the rest. The build up has been great, but I am enjoying that we're starting to get some more action. Thank you Joyce :)
Date: February 16 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to seeing what she does to Lucas. Great work!
Date: September 24 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just a silly little thing - "Sofia" vs "Sophia" (I searched for "Sofia" because I didn't remember which one she was, and I got no results because all occurrences in previous chapters have "ph" instead of "f")
Date: September 22 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
Not sure how my brain decides between stalking authors with comments or being radio silent while I read, but let me tell you (since somehow I only commented here a few seconds ago :) that this story is absolutely fenomenal!
Date: September 22 2020 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I confess my ignorance about electronics; computers could be mechanical or hydraulical for all I care, as long as they run my programs.
And btw, not many people know that Ada Lovelace also apparently (but not certainly) invented another construct that we programmers use a lot, the typo - https://twobithistory.org/2018/08/18/ada-lovelace-note-g.html :)





Date: September 12 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story by a great writer!
Rare that we have the pleasure of such an accomplished writer creating such fantastical fetish fiction! Definitely checking out your patreo, Jocelyn...and thank you for sharing your dreams!
-Elbee
Author's Response:
Hi Elbee! Thanks so much for your kind response! I'm happy that I can write stories that you enjoy! <3 <3
Date: September 05 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
is this story gonna have size content? if it's up to chapter 15, maybe post enough that it's actually size fetish
Author's Response:
Haha, ohhhh yes -- this story will have PLENTY of size content. You could join my Patreon and see, but otherwise you're just gonna have to wait ;)





Date: September 05 2020 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, CW! <3 <3