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Reviewer: jujubee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2008 9:29 PM Title: D B D DDD B

Awesome ideas and very well written!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2008 4:51 AM Title: D B D DDD B

 Okay, yet another yarn that took a time to get to the gist - girl-power, ability to shrink things as well as humans.   A good scenario, the scene being Africa. A pity Carla and her spiritual friend were not black. That would make a change.  May I point out two spelling errors?  First, you keep writing "feint" whereas it should be "faint" and the second is "breath" as apposed to "breathe"

  The former, 'breath' pronounced breth, a noun, is to take a breath.  Breathe is the verb...to breathe.

Anyway (NOT 'anyways') it will be interesting to read the 3rd part, and let's hope whoever is shrunk is not too tiny.

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