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Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2020 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a really fun little story! I love full-tour, and your plot devices were very intriguingly applied. The "I shit you not," was both a fun play on words and a good story mechanic to accomplish your goals here. I was a little shocked by the little "development" that took place between getting him out and making things right, but the follow-on dialog just made me think that Frankie is shamelessly kinky, so it fits, and that's great. Seems like she's down for anything! Frankie and Steve Just discovered something very new about themselves. 

I know this was a request, so I doubt you'll continue on with it, but I'd definitely read more smut involving these two. I always enjoy willing tinies and happy endings! 

Your writing was smooth and intelligible as always, keep up the great work! 

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