[Report This]Date: September 16 2021 2:31 PM Title: That Doesn't Go There
It would be great if you revisited this story. Show how things are going for both Dotty and Meep at some point well into the future. I think it would be lovely if Dotty forced Meep to eat her shit as part of his diet -- or perhaps her shit becoming his exclusive diet. It would make sense with his broken jaw that he can't chew food anymore, but Dotty's waste would not only be conveniently pre-chewed but also pre-digested for him. It would just fit so well with the theme of him becoming increasingly bound to her and completely dominated by her, that everything he now eats is second hand food that passed through her body first. Please consider updating this story and making this a reality!
Alternately (or perhaps additionally), you could continue the story depicting Meep's death and how it occurred. Then have Dotty meet up with Lynn and they begin discussing who is replacement will be.
But no matter how you do it, please don't let it end like this with Meep's ultimate fate being a mystery!
Date: September 07 2020 1:39 AM Title: That Doesn't Go There
Wow, what an awesome ending. I have to say though that it's a shame there will be no more to this story. But then it's arrived at a logical conclusion I guess. Saying that it would still be nice to perhaps see it revisited some time in the future. Maybe a kind of 'One Year On' sort of thing, with Lynn spotting Dotty out and about, shopping maybe, and stopping to chat with her.
I'm particularly partial to 'Unseen Torment' in GTS stories so to speak, you know, the kind of thing where perhaps a tiny person is hidden upon a persons body and suffering, whilst all around nobody is any the wiser. Maybe Dotty will have found out a way to keep Meep within her and remaining alive? Another modification utilising a breathing tube perhaps?
Whatever the case, thank you for posting this great story. It was a wonderful read...
Date: September 04 2020 10:00 AM Title: That Doesn't Go There
Dios mio, que gran historia,espero este no se el fuinal de esta historia,.es maravillosa,me encanta como escribes,muchas gracias y por favor continua esta historia
[Report This]Date: August 30 2020 7:25 PM Title: That Doesn't Go There
I have to say this is really a fun story! Hope Dorothy can bring Simon around to enjoying the experience...
[Report This]Date: August 27 2020 2:40 PM Title: That Doesn't Go There
Love this. Great set up and the potential is off the charts. I cannot wait till the next chapter.