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Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another fantastic chapter! I felt myself heavily empathizing with Sam and a bit with Rachel at the end. I love how real the characters feel! I keep wanting to see them overcome the challenges that come between them. I'm really hoping they have a heart to heart in one of the following chapters because they clearly mean a great deal to each other, even if Rachel was a bit insensitive towards Sam. I just wish the best for them. You've somehow managed to make me deeply care about a fictitious romantic relationship between two fictional characters as much as I would care about a serious relationship between my friends. Keep up the excellent writing! 



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for the great review! I try to keep both characters likeable and relatable, so they'll have some disagreements and arguments every now and then, even though they do love one another deeply and try their best to adapt to their strange situation. I hope you'll enjoy reading further about their relationship. There'll be more heart-to-heart scenes to come, along with some sexy scenes as well!

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2020 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

 

If he manages to kill the wasp with a stick like a good warrior, that will somehow be impressive to her girlfriend, I hope



Author's Response:

I'm sure she'll be very impressed, not to mention relieved that he wasn't killed!

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