Date: August 27 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice to see another story from you. This is a good start. The character reactions are realistic and well written. His decision to leave definitely escalated things quickly. Will Rachel be able to find him? I would imagine that he didn't get very far at his size.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, it's great to hear from you again! You're right about him not getting very far, despite it feeling like a great distance to him. But that's part of being shrunk that he'll need to adjust to.
Date: August 26 2020 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start to this story. It got interesting very quickly with is decision to leave Rachel. Can't wait to see where this goes - hopefully not down the drain ! Will he work his way out of this predicament or will Rachel rescue him at the last minute or will someone else less friendly than Rachel come along. Can't wait for that next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter. I guess it's not much of a spoiler to say he won't be dying next chapter already!
Date: August 26 2020 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Damn this a heck of a beginning 😳 I can't wait for what's next!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter will be up soon.