[Report This]Date: August 26 2020 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
For the limitations surrounding it, pretty good. It felt like it kept mostly consistent with the brutal tone and second-by-second planning of the original story, while maintaining a way more narrow focus on a smaller set of characters. It would've been neat to see a bit of the other protagonists, but I know how it is. It does feel like Grace's change in focus, Katie's health, and Oliver's plans change a bit abruptly from the previous bit; but withinthe narrative, their actions all feel consistent and logical.
(And I partly agree that "Realistic" is a little unfitting, considering characters jumping into danger and/or being excessively unobservant; but that's a lingering problem with the original, not yours. Realism's overrated, anyway.)
Date: August 22 2020 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh okay , and I mean realistic stories have real acts ( like the giantess well be more realistic , no goddess , no proprety stufff because we are in the 21th century ), and girls are always sentimental and usually gentle , good job , make more stories that have realistic acts and graphic , thank you .
Date: August 22 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
You call this realistic , i speak about the acts and not the graphics.
Author's Response:
Not quite sure I understand. Plus this was a commissions o not entirely my idea.