[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 9: Settling Depths
Sorry, I was a bit distracted and unable to come to the site for a few days, and with the 3 chapters here it looks like I missed an update. Just able to read this chapter for now, but I'll get to the others soon enough. And what a great chapter! You were really able to make it quite erotic with the double swallowing. There's something about being a tiny to someone who is a tiny to someone else that is a bit exciting. And true to the form of her species so far, the big one was quite open about very much enjoying this experience. And what the experience for Leo inside of another Naga takes her up on her idea and he's in there while they get it on lol.
i hope to read 10 and 11 soon!
Author's Response:
You have nothing to apologize for! You don't have to leave me these wonderful reviews at all, so I'm delighted that you do no matter when you get around to it. It's always a happy surprise to open my browser and see that I've gotten another, especially from someone who has been following along!
And I've always loved the idea of a good, sultry, double-vore scenario, and the way I wrote these characters practically begged for it. And I was pleased with how I was able to "justify it" in terms of the story.
I hope you enjoy the next couple chapters too! Thanks so much for your continued feedback! I'll keep writing as long as people keep enjoying it. Until I come to a proper ending, anyway. But then I'll just start the next thing.
Date: September 08 2020 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: Settling Depths
I'm honestly looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, and I'm kind of hoping Leo takes Vela's full tour... Though I am enjoying this as both an actual story and a Fetish story, so while I would love to see some butt stuff, I don't want it to mess with the story. I'm also looking forward to seeing Jackie and Leo's interactions in the future, not to mention how Vela and Jackie interact with each other with Leo...
Author's Response:
For reasons that would ultimately spoil the next chapter were I to elaborate, I'll just say that some of the desires expressed in this review would have been satisfied if I had decided to post chapters nine and ten at the same time like I had for most of the previous 2-chapter drops, but alas, I decided that ten needed a little more refinement. Though I'll admit, I shouldn't have put the "butt" tag on without being absolutely sure i was ready to post it. But fear not! Check back in a few hours.
As far as not wanting lewd content to mess with the story itself, I really appreciate your expressing that. It's a hard balance to strike when I am trying to tell a somewhat compelling and legitimate story that was primarily inspired by the G/t interactions. I'm trying to make those interactions hold more meaning because of the experiences and relationships that the main characters share. So I thank you for your patience!
Thank you so much for your review!