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Reviewer: Curvograph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Better Know Your Beast

The first six chapters prove you are a great storyteller with some most unique and unexpected ideas. Though today I have to be brief, I will do my best to leave a more detailed review soon. So far, the story is pure gold. I cannot wait to read more!

 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! It's okay that you're being "brief," you said a lot with very little, and it made me feel great! A Few kind words go a long way! And I'll be done with the next chapter soon! So stay tuned, and I'll hungrily await any more positivity you deign me worthy of bestowing!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! It's okay that you're being "brief," you said a lot with very little, and it made me feel great! A Few kind words go a long way! And I'll be done with the next chapter soon! So stay tuned, and I'll hungrily await any more positivity you deign me worthy of bestowing!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 6: Better Know Your Beast

Another two great chapters. Each set so far has brought a bit of a distinctive flavor from the last. Pretty light on the lewd content, but lots of story fills it up just fine. Jackie is cool, interesting name lol. 

Cool to find out some more of the lore in this universe. Humans really are the worst, aren't we? Hopefully their plan to save Jackie goes well, but seems like little Leo will be in for quite a bit of risk. I'll be interested to see how long jackie sticks around, if they can save her.

Maybe a bit of foreshadowing on another creature we might see has gone on in this chapter?



Author's Response:

First and foremost, thank you so much for being so present in the reviews. You haven't missed an update, and that makes me feel awesome as a content creator. 

I've tried to make the story dynamic even though interns of big events, not a lot has happened. But so far I've attempted to incorporate a consistent theme of loners sticking together. As for Jackie's name, I was paying no attention to the accidental reference I was making to a former First Lady. I realized after I had published the chapters just what it was that I had done, and I find it somewhat hilarious. To level with you, Jacqueline was meant to bear resemblance to "jackal," and Kennedy was meant to sound like "canidae," both heavy-handed references to "dog." 

And I am striving to pepper in more about the world as I go along to perpare for a connected, follow-on project that will loosely connect with this story. The next chapter has a lot of moving pieces, so I'm having a little difficulty producing it with the same speed as the previous ones, but I hope it delivers! I'd rather spend more time on it than produce something sloppy. But I promise, I won't let this story stagnate. And humans aren't all bad! Jackie is human! And so was Green! Idk how you feel about Green. 

I shan't disclose in this response whether you're on the money or not as to what other creatures the following chapters will feature... *wink* 

Thanks again for your continued reviews! 

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