[Report This]Date: July 30 2023 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 4: Exploring Our Love
This... it's incredibly rare for me to enjoy a flat-out sex scene, normally I skip them to get to the story faster, but this... this was different, I'll remember this for a while.
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Date: August 31 2020 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Exploring Our Love
So glad you decided to continue this. There was more intriguing world building with details about vampire and werewolf physiology and hints about the fae. I loved the line about wings tickling on the way down.
I'm not sure about the love at first sight aspect. They seem to be moving awfully fast considering they just met. But I enjoyed the sex scene regardless. Really liking this story and these characters.
Author's Response:
Hey, welcome back! Thank you for leaving me another review! I'm glad that I've been able to capture your continued interest in my somewhat particular brand of magical creatures in terms of physiology. Can't just recycle the same, tired fantasy molds in their exactitude. So I'm glad you appreciate what, for me, is half the fun.
As far as not being sure about the "love at first sight," I actually responded to a compliment on my handling of that in another review: you and me both. I was very hesitant while constructing that. But I've committed to it and I'm sticking to it. They're both tragically lonely, human-dependent people in a vulnerable position. It may not be wise or even the healthiest decision to allow themselves to fall so suddenly head over heels, but as far as catches go, I tried to make them both very justifiably "easy to love." I don't expect to win you over on what was ultimately just rushed relationship development. I favored it over saying "and six months later they were in love," because hate that idea even more and don't have six months worth of story to tell in this particular arc. But I suppose I could have just held back in general. Just know that your feedback there is both justified and duly noted. So thank you.
But I'm glad you were able to enjoy the scene anyway. Haha.
Thanks again for the follow-up review! That means a lot to me. Especially since you were willing to stick with me and tell me both what you did like and didn't. Much obliged.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Exploring Our Love
These two chapters were great additions. I think you have absolutely done it the right way. My favorite stories on this site all have in common the exploration of the emotional relationship between giantesses and tinies. I think the sex scenes, in the end, are best done when deeply tying in not just the physical aspect, but the emotions of the one being taken entirely inside the other, as something to be deeply cherished, protected, and loved.
That sort of asnwers your question in regards to my previous review as well. Usually vore is a category I dislike in that it above the others is most often done out of a desire to dominate and destroy, rather than to love and protect. As a result I generally prefer things like insertion. But you turned that dynamic on its head in your first vore scene, and I am all here for it. Though this insertion was great as well. I won't lie, I like to have these sex scenes in my giantess stories. But I get the most joy out of the graceful way you and some other writers do it.
So thank you for writing this! I'm excited to see where the story goes. Seems the werewolf is not confined to their past yet!
Author's Response:
Thanks for being here in the reviews! This is the kind of feedback I live for. It's not just an affirmation that I've either written well or tapped into something someone likes to see, but a detailed explanation as to specifically what you enjoyed and why you enjoyed it.
I couldn't agree more with your take on what you think makes sexual interactions between giantesses and tinies so enjoyable. I am definitely not here to yuck on anyone else's yums or anything. No shame in anyone else's desired means for exploring these kinks. That said, to me, it's a complex, dynamic, and visceral fantasy that if I were given the opportunity to explore it in reality, I would want it to go in a somewhat particular way; namely, if vore or insertion or anything else is a sexual act, I'd want it to be consensual, emotionally gratifying, and meaningful. I wouldn't want to be powerlessly at the whim of some dominatrix's merciless and selfish desires. I'd want it to be mutual. again though, I completely understand why this fetish has so much crossover with dom/sub power fantasies. It makes sense. But I crave something a little different, so I set out to write it.
That does answer my question, thank you! I think we are on a similar page. even when I write fatal vore, I've tried to do it in a "dark erotic fantasy" manner where the tiny is getting what they always wanted. In the strict realm of fantasy, that's fun to tap into. (But with this much effort put into character development, I would be extremely loathe to let one die).
And oh, you may be right about that! I think I've been alluding to that eventual encounter since chapter 2!
Seriously, thanks a lot for your thoughtful review. It's really good to feel engaged! I'll be dropping the next chapters soon! Stay tuned!