[Report This]Date: August 27 2020 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Man Called Green
I just wanted to tell you I love your story so far. I'm usually not a big fan of vote stories because I'm not a cruel giantess fan, but you made so wholesome I could die. The writing is structured very well and kept my attention the whole way through. Really excited to see this story continue!
Author's Response:
Ahhh thank you so much! Knowing that I did well by you and you're not even usually a vore fan is big praise indeed! If I may ask, what're your favorite G/t situations if not vore?
And I hear that. I love vore more than anything in G/t scenarios, but I, too, rather dislike cruel giantesses. I think it's because vore is a sexual fantasy for me, and I'm not into non-consensual sexual scenarios, even in the realm of pure fantasy. Cruel isn't a deal breaker for my enjoyment, but I don't tend to write it. Gentle/safe vore was a primary objective in this tale. I personally find it easier/more desirable to get into the headspace of the characters if I think they're both having a good time!
I'd say my entire mission as an author in this community is to try and create more good, wholesome, heartfelt content between the big and small, erotic or otherwise. But I really just want to capture the minds of my readers while telling a good story in the process of creating that content which I love.
I hope I don't let you down, Foreignkanto, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 26 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Man Called Green
My goodness. You're certainly a quick writer. Definitely wasn't expecting a second chapter so quickly. Especially one so complete and full. I guess inspiration must have hit for this one, eh?
Appears as if Vela relishes moments that allow her to use her abilities, perhaps especially now that she has someone in her life to actively show them off to. Also, I love her little nicknames for Leo.
And their journey begins! Who knows what's in store for them in the future, who knows what's to come, and who knows who that mysterious stranger was, and what impact he may have on their story!
All in all, great chapter and all I can really say is: Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Hey, if people like you keep giving me little jolts of dopamine in the form of feedback, I'll keep feeling gratified, inspired, and enabled to keep pressing forward with this story! It's especially nice hearing from the same person on two chapters, as that tells me that for at least someone, I'm doing something right in terms of captivation and development, so thanks a lot for keeping up and the second review, Jimbob!
I do think that Vela loves the undivided attention she's getting from Leo. It's like she's able to feed off him in a way unique to his disposition. And I do strive to keep the nicknames diverse and dynamic! Thanks for noticing! I don't like my writing to slump into repetition where I can avoid it.
And who knows, indeed! (I'll give you a hint, I kind of know, at least in the short term, though I have some vague ideas for the long term. But that could require a lot of development.)
thanks again for your kind words and the five star review! Your feedback was even more prompt than my second chapter! I was surprised to see it!