[Report This]Date: August 18 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends
Good lord, this is one of the best GTS stories I've ever read! haven't found something like this for quite some time (at least in 2020).
I can't help but register on this site for the first time just to review this work.
Vela is such a charming girl - subtle beauty yet can also be very seductive. I would love to be Leo, seriously, what a lucky guy.
I love how you make this story mildly erotic here and there, without having to rely on excessive sex scenes or other R-rated contents. Sometimes those stuff just kill the mood - this is much more enjoyable IMHO.
(Apart from that, this friendly soft vore thing with a lot of gentle interaction actually reminds me of a story I've found on deviantart years ago, about the princess and an orphan boy in her wine, sadly it seems that the author deleted his account - but ultimately they just got similar vibe, I wouldn't compare apple to orange)
Also, making paragraphs like this is a lot easier to read, so perhaps another plus here.
Overall, this is really good. Looking forward to the continuation!
Author's Response:
Well, imagine my delight in reading this review! Seriously, thanks a lot. Making an account just to let me know you appreciate my efforts goes a long way. I tend to just write the kind of content I'd like to read more of, so if it's been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading a particular kind of story, I just write one! Reviews like yours let me know that I'm not alone in what I like to see; so thanks for that!
I'm so glad you like her character. She was inspired by some of Saftkeur's materials, and I get a rather innocent vibe from their work, so that same kind of energy felt fitting for this story.
My other material on here tends to be much more on the explicitly erotic side, and that's fine and fun, but I really wanted to just focus more on soft, consensual vore with this one, and I agree that a lot of overtly sexual material would have simply served to distract from the main course. And it just didn't strike me as in keeping with my vision for Vela. Leo might be interested in a little something more, but he's not one to push people out of their comfort zones, even if he's willing to go out of his.
And ah, the horrid plight of not being able to find that one story you used to love. I feel your pain. Well I'm happy to have assuaged you're suffering with a bit of a substitute.
And I go to great pains for intelligible formatting. Thanks for noticing.
Your review, as well as some others, really makes me feel encouraged to continue with these characters! I just need to come up with some ideas of what sort of adventures they'd get into!
Thank you again for the kind words!
Date: August 18 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends
great story.
I'm curious about Leo Vel's further adventures.
more please.
I like such stories non-fatal .
you describe it great.
I'm sorry, my english is bad.
Author's Response:
You certainly don't have to apologize for any level of English skill, I'm just glad you left a review! So, thank you!
I also really enjoy non-fatal vore, and I wrote this story just to do that. This is the most reviews I have ever received and the story has been posted less than a day, so maybe I will have to make more of it.
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: August 18 2020 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends
This was without a doubt one of the best stories I've read in a long while. I love both Vela and Leo! I don't know if you plan on writing more but I'd love to hear more about these two!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I wouldn't say i was specifically NOT planning to write more with these characters. I only have vague ideas of where I'd like to go with this relationship and what sort of adventures they could have. I was just trying to establish an interesting and unique G/t relationship with a justifiable and believably non-fatal vore dynamic, Especislly between two parties who had never tried it. I was working on a few stories like that when this one occurred to me and I was able to bang it out in a few days. If the inspiration strikes, I'll probably press forward!
Thank you for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed it! It's a great feeling.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I wouldn't say i was specifically NOT planning to write more with these characters. I only have vague ideas of where I'd like to go with this relationship and what sort of adventures they could have. I was just trying to establish an interesting and unique G/t relationship with a justifiable and believably non-fatal vore dynamic, Especislly between two parties who had never tried it. I was working on a few stories like that when this one occurred to me and I was able to bang it out in a few days. If the inspiration strikes, I'll probably press forward!
Thank you for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed it! It's a great feeling.
Date: August 18 2020 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends
Yowza! I'm not exaggerating when I say this is the best story I've read on this site all year! Vela and Leo are both wonderfully written and incredibly charming characters, and their dialogue...hoo boy is it good! I'm in love with this story. Fantastic work there mate!
Author's Response:
Oh, wow! That's extremely high praise, thank you! I really wanted these characters to feel believably fleshed out in terms of their thoughts, fears, and desires. If I'm being honest, I almost felt like I underdeveloped Leo a bit, as I originally intended to back the story up and tell the day from his perspective up to the point of his being captured. But I decided in favor of both brevity and straightforward, chronological progression for ease of reading. And I personally feel that it's the dialog that always makes these sorts of stories really stand out in my memory, so I try to use it to drive the scenarios and lay out the "rules" of the fantasy dynamic instead of using disclaimers and exposition.
Thanks again for taking the time on the sparkling review! You really made my morning!