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Reviewer: Chonch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2022 10:02 AM Title: A new toy

Love the concept. You're a good writer

Reviewer: Gwonam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2020 10:26 PM Title: A new toy

What an amazing story! I really like how cruel she is, despite being a vegan... caring about animals and such, but not about his insignificant existence.

However, why is it mentioned once that she has eaten meat, when you've specified before that she's a vegan? Is it because she is actually a meat lover in secret?

If you ever find the time, please do write a fifth chapter. I'll read your other stories regardless. Cheers!

Author's Response:

First off have to say thank you for the praise.  Yes she is decently cruel even for her love of animals.  Probably what happened is I made an error with consitentcy, because I wrote multipel stories at the same time and I got carried away with making a good story.  I will probably go back and edit that part to change so she only eats Vegans food.  I really do want to make a 5th part.  On my deviantart page I made an update talking abotu how I only plan on continueing my Vegan, and Brazilian fart slave stories with the format with a "Cruel giantess" theme.  My future stories that will be complete will have a less tense tone of cruelty.  These I plan on continueing for a long time.  I am working on some other projects, so those are coming out too.  Also not all my stories are released on this web site. Regardless it is a pretty good interesting story.

Reviewer: 3l33thax0r Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 12:47 AM Title: Getting sewn in

I'm loving this story so far! Was going to comment on the formatting, but it looks like you figured it out by the third chapter (this site's formatting is weird).

Looking forward you the next chapter! :D

Author's Response:

Appreciate your comment.  Ah yah I copy and pasted this from my deviantart page.  This was also day one of me using the website.  I will edit the story and make the format better.

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