[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 Lifes a Happy Song
Wow, I can't believe it's over. I thought once the relationship parts were over, that we would have events of the the drama play happen and something would happen, but it looks like it all got cut out and the students decided to run. The students are saved, but what about Mr. Archie? Lol. Another question is, did Ms. Eve really untied herself and shrunk her sister, or was that a typo and Ms. Daisy was the one who shrunk Ms. Eve?
I will be honest, when I saw that this story was marked "completed", I was mad at first, haha. I wanted this story to go on as long as possible, but realistically, I didn't even think we were close to the end. However, after reading your details at the end of the story, I can relate to your struggles for finding new content to continue the story. In my own story, I was able to write about giantess panties content for about 5 chapters and soon, I couldn't think of more ways to utilize that idea anymore.
Also, I agree. Your first few chapters in my opinion were the best. They way all the students were innocent and naive and had to listen to Ms. Eve simply because she was the teacher and she knew it too so she took advantage of it. They way she introduced herself and partnered everyone, especially Luke was more exciting than anything the students ever did in this story for me.
Now, since I'm a fan (I guess superfan since you mentioned it), it was hard to read about the students beating her up. Even though she was supposedly evil, I felt it was too harsh to have the students punch and kick her and then tie her up. I'm a weird person, right? I enjoy Ms. Eve using Luke as her sex toy, but I call a little scuffle "too harsh" lol. But yeah, seeing Ms. Eve struggling near the end made me want to jump through my screen and help her regain power again.
After reading your ending notes, I'm guessing Ms. Daisy was another giantess you could use to make new content, but also keep that sadistic side of the story flowing, but then you changed your mind as Ms. Daisy basically didn't do much in the end. It's fine with me, there could only be one naughty teacher for me. You mentioned that Daisy is the more cunning sister. Maybe for the prequel, you could add that cleverness to Ms. Eve since I assume that story is about her rise to her powerful position.
Speaking of the spinoffs, I think it's funny how they seem to be addressed to both me and @LittleRomance. I laughed especially when you said that first spinoff had no Ms. Eve at all. Now that was funny. You mentioned that story would involve the students and their lives, beyond the school which I guess seems somewhat interesting, but ultimately what kept me interested in this story was Ms. Eve and that makes me excited for her prequel. I still want to learn more details about Luke and I wonder if he will be able to share his story. I'm curious to see how he saw his time with Ms. Eve since he barely said anything at all while serving her.
Oh, quick question: Are you a Westworld fan? I recognize that chapter quote! I wonder if that show was an inspiration to this story.
For the Ms. Eve prequel, wow. You already got a title! I hope we get to see Ms. Eve in the way I saw her at the beginning of this story. Back when none of the students has any idea what was going on and Ms. Eve just casually dominates everyone. You mentioned that the story is a blank slate and I'm assuming you are open to suggestions.
Alright, well since the prequel seems to be centered in a school and knowing Ms. Eve's character, I think you gotta include some detention or some special tutoring of some kind. I think every school story with a naughty teacher could use that to her advantage. You could have some student award or something and the prize is a weekend of fun with Ms. Eve, but no one has any idea what it means but the lucky (unfortunate) student basically becomes her plaything. I think less main characters would mean more time with Ms. Eve so it doesn't become too similar to this story.
The partner concept is interesting because there's some good and bad to it. The good is that whoever partners up with Ms. Eve becomes the character I wish to be. The bad part is that I wouldn't really care much for the other characters in the story. So I'm not sure I you want to keep that partner system for the prequel. It could also be a story focused one young human guy who accidentally signs up for the wrong class and the story focuses on him and how he winds up with Ms. Eve and she uses him. I don't know, but that's another possibility.
As for classes, I like the gym class. I didn't really mind drama, art, or even the woodworking one. Lol. Maybe you could have a history class where humans and aliens try to mingle but throughout history, stuff happens which you could fill in. There could be a sex Ed class and well, anything could happen there. Lol. Maybe some language class and Ms. Eve tricks a student to say some forbidden command to get themselves shrunk or something. There could be a magic class where spells are involved and that could involve shrinking, maybe longer tongues, etc. There could be a theatre club class where students (and maybe Ms. Eve) play roles and have to act as something.
Also, how could I forget, yoga! We gotta have Ms. Eve stretch with a tiny on her! There could also be a class exclusively on the species that Ms. Eve is. (I forgot what species she is called.) But while the class gets a standard lesson from books, one lucky student gets to learn physically if you know what I mean. Ok, this one is a stretch, but maybe a "craft" class or something where the students learn just random equipment and life skills. And one day, Ms. Eve suggests how to tie someone up (for emergencies, she suggests. Lol.) Then Ms. Eve would demonstrate it on someone and wrap them up so well that the class is kinda scared, haha. Then Ms. Eve could show what she can do with a tied up person and she could sit on him, lay down on him and all that while the student squirms beneath her.
Since the story is revolving around Ms. Eve, I think classes that are generally sexual or could be sexual would be fantastic. Even something like a sex toy class where actual vibrators are used, but then Ms. Eve teaches that human sex toys are better and such. I think with Ms. Eve, would could also have her ask a student to come by her house and help with something. Or maybe she has one of those small long sleeping bags that Kairi had. (I really liked the creativity of that sleeping bag. It is perfect for oral sex!) Ms. Eve could tell a shy student that she didn't want to test her sleeping bag first so has a guy do it and once he says it's good and tries to come out, Ms. Eve just slides in and pushes his head down and forces his face into her crotch and says good night or something like that. Man, I love that sleeping bag. Ms. Eve probably doesn't even have to toy with a shrunken guy all the time, he could simply be regular sized, but all tied up. She could kidnap a guy from his bed and tie him up spread-eagle position to her bed and she sleeps on top of him that night. Of course, having a tied up shrunk guy in her panties while she is sleeping is probably the sexiest way Ms. Eve could rest that night. (Man, I wish I was Luke.)
Well, I might have more suggestions and stuff to say, but this is what I thought of right now and maybe you might like these ideas. Or not. Haha.
Well, I can't wait for that prequel story!