[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Wow..its over...
That was a great story! Very happy they all got together in the end.
Kind of confused where Phil went? Maybe I missed it..
I do agree with tom. It very nice to see you doing 2 different stories for me and him. Romantic for me and naughty for tom.
I loved your story and I'm hoping to see more!
Ps. In your romantic spin off can you add 2 characters named after me and my girlfriend? Ian is my name and Ana is hers. Please? If you could that would be awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And for the constant reviews, always a joy reading them.
Phil was picked up by Aerin and taken to the ship she aquired. He will get more developtment in the sequel.
I loved both directions for the story, but it was impossible to do both without one suffering. I made the original story with a Ms Eve VS Students design, but fell in love with the characters, it was hard to write them in this way without breaking the developtment I had written. So my next idea was, splitting to a prequel and sequel.
Glad you enjoyed it, I am in the process of writing the sequel now!
100% yes, consider them added.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 Lifes a Happy Song
Wow, I can't believe it's over. I thought once the relationship parts were over, that we would have events of the the drama play happen and something would happen, but it looks like it all got cut out and the students decided to run. The students are saved, but what about Mr. Archie? Lol. Another question is, did Ms. Eve really untied herself and shrunk her sister, or was that a typo and Ms. Daisy was the one who shrunk Ms. Eve?
I will be honest, when I saw that this story was marked "completed", I was mad at first, haha. I wanted this story to go on as long as possible, but realistically, I didn't even think we were close to the end. However, after reading your details at the end of the story, I can relate to your struggles for finding new content to continue the story. In my own story, I was able to write about giantess panties content for about 5 chapters and soon, I couldn't think of more ways to utilize that idea anymore.
Also, I agree. Your first few chapters in my opinion were the best. They way all the students were innocent and naive and had to listen to Ms. Eve simply because she was the teacher and she knew it too so she took advantage of it. They way she introduced herself and partnered everyone, especially Luke was more exciting than anything the students ever did in this story for me.
Now, since I'm a fan (I guess superfan since you mentioned it), it was hard to read about the students beating her up. Even though she was supposedly evil, I felt it was too harsh to have the students punch and kick her and then tie her up. I'm a weird person, right? I enjoy Ms. Eve using Luke as her sex toy, but I call a little scuffle "too harsh" lol. But yeah, seeing Ms. Eve struggling near the end made me want to jump through my screen and help her regain power again.
After reading your ending notes, I'm guessing Ms. Daisy was another giantess you could use to make new content, but also keep that sadistic side of the story flowing, but then you changed your mind as Ms. Daisy basically didn't do much in the end. It's fine with me, there could only be one naughty teacher for me. You mentioned that Daisy is the more cunning sister. Maybe for the prequel, you could add that cleverness to Ms. Eve since I assume that story is about her rise to her powerful position.
Speaking of the spinoffs, I think it's funny how they seem to be addressed to both me and @LittleRomance. I laughed especially when you said that first spinoff had no Ms. Eve at all. Now that was funny. You mentioned that story would involve the students and their lives, beyond the school which I guess seems somewhat interesting, but ultimately what kept me interested in this story was Ms. Eve and that makes me excited for her prequel. I still want to learn more details about Luke and I wonder if he will be able to share his story. I'm curious to see how he saw his time with Ms. Eve since he barely said anything at all while serving her.
Oh, quick question: Are you a Westworld fan? I recognize that chapter quote! I wonder if that show was an inspiration to this story.
For the Ms. Eve prequel, wow. You already got a title! I hope we get to see Ms. Eve in the way I saw her at the beginning of this story. Back when none of the students has any idea what was going on and Ms. Eve just casually dominates everyone. You mentioned that the story is a blank slate and I'm assuming you are open to suggestions.
Alright, well since the prequel seems to be centered in a school and knowing Ms. Eve's character, I think you gotta include some detention or some special tutoring of some kind. I think every school story with a naughty teacher could use that to her advantage. You could have some student award or something and the prize is a weekend of fun with Ms. Eve, but no one has any idea what it means but the lucky (unfortunate) student basically becomes her plaything. I think less main characters would mean more time with Ms. Eve so it doesn't become too similar to this story.
The partner concept is interesting because there's some good and bad to it. The good is that whoever partners up with Ms. Eve becomes the character I wish to be. The bad part is that I wouldn't really care much for the other characters in the story. So I'm not sure I you want to keep that partner system for the prequel. It could also be a story focused one young human guy who accidentally signs up for the wrong class and the story focuses on him and how he winds up with Ms. Eve and she uses him. I don't know, but that's another possibility.
As for classes, I like the gym class. I didn't really mind drama, art, or even the woodworking one. Lol. Maybe you could have a history class where humans and aliens try to mingle but throughout history, stuff happens which you could fill in. There could be a sex Ed class and well, anything could happen there. Lol. Maybe some language class and Ms. Eve tricks a student to say some forbidden command to get themselves shrunk or something. There could be a magic class where spells are involved and that could involve shrinking, maybe longer tongues, etc. There could be a theatre club class where students (and maybe Ms. Eve) play roles and have to act as something.
Also, how could I forget, yoga! We gotta have Ms. Eve stretch with a tiny on her! There could also be a class exclusively on the species that Ms. Eve is. (I forgot what species she is called.) But while the class gets a standard lesson from books, one lucky student gets to learn physically if you know what I mean. Ok, this one is a stretch, but maybe a "craft" class or something where the students learn just random equipment and life skills. And one day, Ms. Eve suggests how to tie someone up (for emergencies, she suggests. Lol.) Then Ms. Eve would demonstrate it on someone and wrap them up so well that the class is kinda scared, haha. Then Ms. Eve could show what she can do with a tied up person and she could sit on him, lay down on him and all that while the student squirms beneath her.
Since the story is revolving around Ms. Eve, I think classes that are generally sexual or could be sexual would be fantastic. Even something like a sex toy class where actual vibrators are used, but then Ms. Eve teaches that human sex toys are better and such. I think with Ms. Eve, would could also have her ask a student to come by her house and help with something. Or maybe she has one of those small long sleeping bags that Kairi had. (I really liked the creativity of that sleeping bag. It is perfect for oral sex!) Ms. Eve could tell a shy student that she didn't want to test her sleeping bag first so has a guy do it and once he says it's good and tries to come out, Ms. Eve just slides in and pushes his head down and forces his face into her crotch and says good night or something like that. Man, I love that sleeping bag. Ms. Eve probably doesn't even have to toy with a shrunken guy all the time, he could simply be regular sized, but all tied up. She could kidnap a guy from his bed and tie him up spread-eagle position to her bed and she sleeps on top of him that night. Of course, having a tied up shrunk guy in her panties while she is sleeping is probably the sexiest way Ms. Eve could rest that night. (Man, I wish I was Luke.)
Well, I might have more suggestions and stuff to say, but this is what I thought of right now and maybe you might like these ideas. Or not. Haha.
Well, I can't wait for that prequel story!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 22 Show Time
Whoa, this is new.
When you said Ms. Eve was going to be the villain, you weren't kidding. I thought she would be the sexy naughty teacher and the story would be about each relationship. But now it seems like it's a students vs Ms. Eve (and Ms. Daisy) type battle.
I'm not sure how I feel about it, but so far, I enjoyed what you wrote so I wouldn't be surprised if I like the upcoming chapters. I like the introduction of Ms. Daisy. It feels like 2 Ms. Eve's and I like it. There's no replacing the Ms. Eve that stole my heart in the beginning of this story though. Haha.
I was hoping Amy would be that evil student who Ms. Eve could keep under her wing. But now it looks like all the students are good? The good news about this is that it means more chances to see Ms. Eve or maybe Ms. Daisy do bad things which the other students try to survive and challenge so I'm excited about that.
I also noticed that little detail where Ms. Eve told Luke that it's time for him to work again right before she sat on him. I don't know why, but I like those little moments. Just little reminders of how dominant Ms. Eve is.
Ms. Eve's sex toy collection was amazing! I mean, those tinies are probably ones she kept for years and toyed with in multiple ways to help Ms. Eve become the expert she truly is. I wonder if Ms. Daisy has her own collection too.
This drama play thing seems like it will be a big part in the new few chapters. I have no idea what these students are planning, but it seems obvious that there's some trick in it somewhere. Glad Ms. Daisy noticed it too and I'm excited for the changes she makes in the script. I have no idea what it would be, but if it helps Ms. Eve, then I would likely enjoy it. Lol.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Nice couple chapters! You had me worried about amy for a second...but now I'm worried about amy even more....Eve is nuts..
And I'm very happy Tom and alisha are getting better together. They have a long road ahead.
All good couple relationships are going forward at a healthy rate.
I'm hope everyone beats Eve.
Keep them coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading as always!
And yeah, Amy has gone from potentially turning bad to being the target of Ms Eve!
Yes they do, but they will make it!
Yes! I am glad at how they have been progressing.
Thanks again for reading and for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 18 The Fourth The Fifth
Hmm. I just read the latest 3 chapters. A little different from the rest of the story.
First, thing I noticed was that there wasn't any Ms. Eve or Amy content in these chapters. My mind is spinning wondering what they possibly could be doing. They possibly got Archie and I'm guessing Luke is with them too. I thought Phill was inside Amy when she visited Ms. Eve's office, so I was surprised to see him chilling in the classroom.
Tom and Aliesha did basically nothing these 3 chapters either lol. They drew nothing during art class, they talked about nothing, and they did nothing while at school or in their dorm. I'm kinda impressed at how you described them doing nothing in multiple ways to show how much their relationship is being tested. I think Tom doesn't mind being alone since he was forced to lick Aliesha for the most part, so I think he is handling it better than his partner. He still kinda likes her I guess, which is why he also has a sad demeanor like his partner.
I think the star of this part of the story is Aerin. She seems to have this naive, innocence about her, which I guess makes Josh start to take care of her like a parent, but now she wants more so they are becoming sexual. Reminds me of some cute love story of two people exploring sex for the first time. Except this time, it's with 2 different species. Their drawings in art class were pretty cool. I also like medieval stuff so dragons, knights and all that would make me smile too. I agree with Jack. They are a weird couple. On the bright side, I think they are figuring it out.
Lastly, we have Jack and Kairi. They are easily the most relatable and if this story was a movie, this couple would be the love interest that the audience would love to see develop. The way they love each other seems very genuine and it doesn't feel random or forced based on the partnerships as the other couples. Also, they are working together to defeat this crazy school system and fending off Kairi's mom's antics which makes Jack and Kairi's bond even stronger. I especially love that little detail at the end where they found the tiny sleeping bag and the small bed. We all know what Ms. Eve's message was for them and Jack and Kairi was like "fuck that" and decided to sleep together, literally. At this rate, I wouldn't be surprised if Jack and Kairi run away together to start a new life together. That's how close I see them, and it's touching.
Some really good chapters here, even without Amy or Ms. Eve. However, I think this just gets me more excited to see what you have planned for both of these naughty women. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review as always.
The latest chapters are a bit of a detour, I wanted to give the characters some rest and also developtment before more heavy stuff hits, especially involving Ms Eve.
Tom and Aliesha had their developtment halted to focus a bit more on the two other couples and finish the chapters I had for them. Now I am focusing on them and the latest chapters deal with their issues and struggles.
Aerin and Josh are an odd couple, but they are brought together, like Kairi and Jack, because of this. And the dragon is from a show they watch in their dorm together (I plan to mention it in the future, perhaps as a little subplot). And the knight is how Aerin sees Josh, her knight who comes to her rescue (even if its just basic stuff).
Jack and Kairi 100% have the strongest connection. Being the target of Ms Eve, they bond over this struggle and this strengthens the relationship.
And glad you liked it. I do apologize slightly for the lack of Ms Eve, as mentioned, I wanted the characters to take a breather. However I have written and uploaded new chapters that 100% focus on here and shine a light more on her long term plans. I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for your review and hope you enjoy the latest chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Oooh things are getting intresting! I love our two couples! They are so sweet and awesome together!
Tom And Alisha need to figure things out. She dosent seem to be very good with her emotions poor girl...
I'm very worried for amy. I hope she dosent become like eve. My guess is she going to try to be cruel but accidentally hurt Phil in the process and she gets super guilty?
I honestly think eve should kind of be in prison for sexual harassment...or at least getting fired.
I'm looking forward to more!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for reading!
The latest chapters deal with the relationship between Tom and Aliesha. I wanted to get the two other couples chapters out before devling into their relationship.
Alongside the newest chapters also deals with Amy's feelings, I hope you enjoy the direction I took.
And thanks again for taking the time to review, hope you enjoy the latest chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Love is Good
Wow, so much has happened!
I actually forgot about Steve and Cindy, haha. I didn't even bother mentioning it in my previous reviews, when you said they left, I was in shock that I forgot about them.
Aerin's character is actually getting interesting. She is starting to care for Josh. And you did a good job explaining it with her backstory about how she never has that social experience growing up, so she mistakes love for other things.
That Wood work class where they switched partners really made some of these relationships change. The fact that some of these giantess's "miss" their tiny really makes them appreciate and crave them longer. Especially with Tom's partner Aleisha. (That's her name, right?)
Kairi is really blossoming into a main character, having "normal" and pretty much ideal girlfriend personalities. Realistically, she is the one you would love to partner with for the average person. She isn't cruel, she is nice and wants a relationship that benefits both people. Jack really savoring his private moments with her.
I'm kinda excited for Amy. A human who wants to be a little sadistic. She might be Ms. Eve's favorite student. I could see it. Especially when at the end, she is asking Ms. Eve for help. Lol. They both share similar mindsets, so I'm curious to see what's in store for them.
For the word working class, I found Josie's character quite funny. As a teacher, she is in charge of the students, but still is fearful of Ms. Eve. I still can't believe she also put Luke in her panties, haha! Poor guy can't catch a break and I love it!
This Archie teacher, man, he is one lucky guy. You could tell he and Ms. Eve have a long history together and it just shows how horny Ms. Eve is. Man, I would fail her class repeatedly just to be with her.
So if Archie is in her pussy, where is Luke? In her ass? Or is Luke deep in Ms. Eve's pussy where he can't tell which way is up or down? I'm curious to know about the details that happens in Ms. Eve's panties.
Speaking of Ms. Eve, what happened that night with Tom? I'm glad they ended up together for a night, but I have no idea what exactly happened. I'm guessing she shrunk him and used him all night, but I'm not sure. Whatever it was, even Alieasha felt bad for him.
My favorite giantesses are the naughty ones. The ones that are sexy, controlling and have a bad girl side to make tinies fear her. And Ms. Eve is that giantess for me. Even the way she talks to Luke is amazing. I just hope there is more dialogue with them. Anything that she says is sexy, as if she has some sexual intention behind every action.
When Ms. Eve got Luke back again, I thought she would say "Miss me?" Or some other clever comment that will make Luke shiver with fright, but instead she casually sits on him. I think that scene could've used a sexy remark or something. Just a thought.
If Ms. Eve is the antagonist, she is the best antagonist I have ever read about. I would join the dark side and join the enemy then, haha. Sure, she is keeping Luke as her prisoner, but who wouldn't want to be in that position. I would gladly trade spots with him as I have mentioned way too many times already. Lol.
I am loving these chapters recent chapters and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Yes, there has been major change.
Cindy and Steve I actually never forgot about, I just had nothing to really write about. While leaving them out for a chapter to think of a relationship to write for them, I found the amount of characters easier to write with and focusing and worrying about 2 more was not worth compromising the story. So left them out to see if they could be inserted in any way. But after so many chapters, I decided to both within the story and outside, write them out.
And thank! Aerin has been an intresting case. I wanted to write a rich girl story without having her have a stereotypical rich girl social status. So having a kind of trapped by fame personality I found worked best. Almost like a tragic tale of a princess trapped in a room, she has never had the feeling of love, so she is confused when its presented.
The Woodwork scene had two motives, to open these characters to loosing thier partners and have them in compromising positions that either strengthened them or broke the relationship. And yes, Aleisha, who is a future focus with Tom in the upcoming chapters.
Kairi is the complete opposite of her mother. Having grown around that type of person, she grew to resent the harsh treatment of people her mother chooses. She just wants a normal life and Jack has been the way for her to do so in this trapped enviroment with Ms Eve.
Amy is both two characters. She is someone who wants to be the centre of attention, the teachers pet and the smart know it all. This also leads her to always wanting to know everything (which is why she always asks questions in Homeroom) and also be on control, especially when it comes to any relationships. She is also the anti-Kairi and one who Ms Eve will attach to as a type of surrogate mother to her, teaching her all she knows. Both Aleisha and Amy have upcoming chapters that will define the future for them.
Josie was basically a human who is trapped in an enviroment she hates and uses sarcasm and a lack of care as a defence mechanism. She cares little for the classes and only follows the script, for the sake of her son and any punishments she might recieve for going too far to annoy higher ups.
Ms Eve and Archie have a long history together, she loves him as he is easily shrunk but also is timid like Phil and obeys almost every command she asks. Never fighting back.
Luke was 'away' during Health lession, Hiding him from Archie so she could convince him to shrink and join her in her panties. If she had luke or shown him, she would have been forced to use Luke in the private rooms. However because she left him elsewhere, she convinced Archie to join her instead. Its why she left class early and came from another area when they rejoined at the classroom, she was taking him elsewhere.
Ms Eve took Tom, still trapped in his box, and used him all night as a sexual toy in her room.
Ms Eve (as I wrote it) used him as more as an object then a toy, even the mentioning of his return was more talking to the class then him. The fact she just casually sits on him without any communication was to display her total control and carelessness for him. (Plus she teases him enough when alone)
Glad you are enjoying her part of the story, there are upcoming chapters that focus more on her dark deeds you should enjoy.
And once again thanks for your reviews! Always a joy to read them, hope to read more soon!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
A ton of great Chapters! I love this story!
Amy...nooooo...your going to drive him away or make him miserable! You should have gone to kalie...well this isnt going to end well...
Still I'm loving this story! There are to few gentle stories and if there are they usually never finished...
Please keep the chapters coming!
Ps. Sorry if I'm over reviewing
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reading! Glad you are enjoying it still.
And yes, Amy has taken a very, very bad decision.
Glad you are still enjoying it, I hope and plan to continue to the eventual end.
And unless there is some rule against it, feel free to review as much as you want! I love reading them, it helps me keep focus and encourages me to keep going and gives me a view on how the writing is and if its still enjoyable. So keep them coming! Love every one of them.
Thanks again for your reviews and I hope you enjoy latest chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2020 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
I'm loving this story! I'm much more a gentle fan and this is going great!
Not a fan of Eve tho. Shes ok.
Aerin needs to tell Josh how much she loves him but shes stubborn like a tsundere lol.
Jack and Kairi is so cute! I love them together!
Does Aliesha care about tom? Not a lot of interaction with them lately. Is she worried about him in Eves hands? Be kind of sweet her worrying about him while lying in bed but not a sexual need but ynow a friend/lover?
And I'm betting Luke is enjoying his freedom
And will anyone die in this story? I'm gonna be sad if any of our guys die....
Author's Response:
So glad your enjoying my story!
And while there hash scenes, mostly involving characters like Eve, most will be gentle as the story continues, as the students evolve and learn from each other. However as any good story, you need an antagonist, and Ms Eve is this person, even is she is quite nasty.
She will, she just needs to figure out how.
And they are the prime couple, I am quite glad on how I have developed their story.
I focus on characters as I need, but take care in not moving too far on one over another. Aliesha will start to open up like the others have. But she is not as easily broken down as the others, being one who has grown up in an enviroment that encouraged her behaviour.
He did for the one night, but he will get some more time off.
While I don't like spoiling elements, I can safely guarantee nobody will die. This is pretty tame story with a focus on the developtment of these broken characters. Killing them would feel weird and take away from the story.
Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9 Wood Class
Man, I still just love how dominant Ms. Eve is! Especially with Luke, keeping him as her pussy slave. I hope she keeps him forever just as Kairi mentioned earlier. When they were at the gym class and she said that Luke was excercising his tongue, that was perfect! Also, when she went to the office and taped up Luke, I got even more excited! So I imagine Luke is still wrapped up inside her, right? If yes, that's amazing! Luke is now in bondage and stuck inside this sexy giantess teacher's pussy. Man, I would love to be in his position.
Speaking of being in Luke's position, I'm curious if Tom will be partnered up with Ms. Eve for this experiment. Not sure if you already wrote the next chapter, but if Ms. Eve decides to pick Tom and keep him afterward, I would have no words to describe how awesome that would be. Maybe it would be too good to be true, haha.
This new girl Aerin, seems alright. She gives me spoiled brat vibes even though she is claimed to be nice to Josh. Weird to see Ms. Eve scared of her, but I guess that helps show us how powerful her family is.
I appreciate how fast you upload chapters and it just adds to my excitement and helps me not forget what happened in previous chapters. But then again, I wouldn't mind reading the previous chapters because they are awesome.
My favorite moment so far is probably a tie between Ms. Eve telling Luke that he will partner with her and the other moment is when she looks down at him and laughs, telling him they will bunk together. Both moments sent chills down my spine imagining the possibilities and you have exceeded those expectations!
I hope you aren't annoyed at my constant praise for Ms. Eve over the other characters. The other characters are great, but Ms. Eve is basically my dream giantess. I can't help it. Her attitude and seductive words, her control over Luke, her desire to have a shrunken pussy slave, all combined together is beautiful! And also, she is a teacher, so she gets to control the class and no one could object to her use of Luke and I love it. I could listen to Ms. Eve talk to Luke and tell him about his future with her, and explain his fate. Ok, I'm rambling too much.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Until the latest chapters I posted, Luke has been trapped within Ms Eve, so he is always close. And while there has been a detour in recent chapters, I can say that Luke and Ms Eve are not going to be apart for long.
I believe the latest chapters will be on great interest to you!
Aerin is my version of a stereotypical princess, she always gets her way and her family ensures that she is always happy. However she was always lonely, Josh is the first person she has actually had close contact with, so she instantly grows to like him.
I write whenever I get the chance, but do stall when I need to review a chapter to ensure its the best it can be. But I try to make them come out sooner then later. But never rushed.
I am glad you enjoyed that interaction! and I enjoy every one of your reviews and am glad you have taken such a shine to Ms Eve. It does not annoy me at all, you enjoy a character I have created so much. I always love your take on Ms Eve and I know I am writing her well everytime you praise her actions!
Thanks again for your review, I await them everytime I upload or check the site.
And I hope you enjoy the latest chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Intresting story so far!
I think the girls are starting to have feelings for their guys. Kind of cute!
Intresting to see where this goes!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
And yes, as the story develops and these strangers start to live together, some are forming connections.
Thank you for reading my story and I hope you continue to enjoy the new chapters as they come.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2020 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Lonely Night
TinyJosh, you are amazing!
I can't believe I am saying this, but this story is already better than your other "Torment of Mankind" story. I also find it easier to follow where as the other one I kinda have to look back to remember who was who.
I love school settings, especially when a teacher is involved which is also what got me into writing my own story on this site. However, as I look back on my story, it feels mediocre compared to this one.
It's also interesting to see that there is a Tom character and I like what he is currently going through. Being trapped all night wrapped up to Aliesha's ass is kinda hot. However, you are right. At least he is not Luke.
Holy shit, I would be in heaven if I was in Luke's position. I mean, even from the beginning it was sexy. Mrs. Eve is a goddess and the way she just decides to have Luke as her partner was completely surprising and erotic, especially when we see tiny George on her chair. And then later on when she tells him that he will bunk with her, yes! My heart was pounding fast! You made her one seductive teacher. Furthermore, her daughter even states that Luke is a goner. Wow, and her mom won't let Luke go? That's incredible! I must take this class! In addition, this final paragraph in chapter 5 was one of the hottest things I have read on this site. Being trapped inside the front side of a sexy teacher's panties all night and forced to lick her until she wakes up. This is basically my fantasy, it's almost as if you read my mind. Maybe she will make him lick her while she teachers the class. If Luke and Tom switched names, I think I would faint, haha. Yeah, as you can tell, the Luke and Mrs. Eve dynamic is my favorite and I don't think that's going to change anytime soon. I look forward to seeing Mrs. Eve turn Luke into her ultimate shrunken sex slave.
The other characters were great too. I just have a complete bias in favor of Mrs. Eve since she is one sexy woman. I like Kairi's character. She has layers and you can see how she tries to deal with school while her mom is in control. Also, Jack has to be careful since Mrs. Eve wants him to please her daughter. Now that's kinda hot since while she orders Jack around, Luke is probably inside her. Lol.
Also, Amy seems to be getting into being in control. Rare to see a human have control, so I'm interested to see how that goes.
Josh is alone, right? Well, for now. I wonder who is classmate/roomate will be. Basically anything could be possible with that.
I'm adding this story to my favorites, because that's how much I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks once again for reading and for leaving a review. Your reviews always lighten up my day and inspire me to keep writing! So I thank you for your continued support.
I have found this series much easier to write, focusing on a smaller group and story. Less back and forward and more experimentation with established characters.
And yes! Tom has alot with his partner but Luke is compelty in a different category.
And I am glad you the story, I have a few surprises coming up I am sure you will enjoy, especially regarding Tom and Luke. Your words of praise mean alot to me!
And yes, the Jack/Kairi/Eve relationship is the heart of the story. While Jack might have ended up with a more tame Kairi, he has the much worse out of them all Ms Eve breathing down his neck.
And yes! Amy was a way to change the dynamic, have a human be on the other side, have her torture and not be tortured.
As for Josh. He is no longer alone, I look forward to his new partner in the chapter I recently released.
And thank you once again for your reviews! I take all your words into my writing and it inspires me to keep writing and keep making it as best as I can be.
Thank you and hope you enjoy the new chapters as they release!