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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

I really liked Rosie's idea about having a tiny guy trapped in that cup that she keeps on her pussy at all times. Now that's hot. 

Samantha's character is also getting interesting as she goes places and meets new characters. 

I also love how sadistic Vanessa is. They way she uses humans to create a chain link to create a panty is cool. Also, I like how she wears a tiny when she is at home. 

The morphing concept sounds pretty cool. I just have a hard time imagining it. Don't get me wrong, it sounds amazing how Tara just morphs people into her body, my silly brain just can't picture it, haha. 

I'm not exactly a fan of Betty and her story, but I like the concept of a giantess having a relationship with a tiny human. I wouldn't mind another relationship story with maybe a more sadistic, yet sexy giantess. Maybe some milf kidnaps a young man, shrinks him and decides to keep him as her lover. Just a thought. 

I'm noticing how these characters have their own story with some human or humans but they also are connected which makes me excited to see some of these giantesses unite against some humans. 

A small detail I liked is how most of the victims are young adults which kinda adds to the experience that they are young and naive and have no idea what they are getting into. Also their youth makes them last longer I imagine. 

Now that I'm getting used to this kind of society, I'm wondering about all the possibilities humans could be used for. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks again for another fantastic detailed review!

Glad you enjoyed Rosie's panty cup, its just one of many devices she has designed for these humans.

And yes, Samantha is the core of the story, being a thread to many different characters and events. Her role will evolve as the story continues as she picks sides on the coming conflict.

 

And thanks! The Panty link was something I had planned from day one, but it needed to be on someone that would make it out of hate and torment then just an accessory. Venessa seemed the best fit, but it will pop up again, and with familiar faces attached.

The morphing stories can be hard to imagine, its why I try not to make as many.

Betty has two story elements attached to her. She is my take on a gentle giantess, one who forms a relationship with a human but not without completly shredding her image of human torture. And she is also the Ying to Venessas Yang. Once tight sisters, the dynamic is that while Betty is gentle, Venessa will go as far as wear humans. This rips a hole in their sister bond and is an arc that is leading up soon.

Almost every story is linked with some element or another. And you are 100% correct, there is a conflict coming and characters will pick sides. Not everyone will survive, and I am not talking death. Shake ups will occur.

Keep reading! I have many more chapters to write with many more situations to use humans in various ways.

Thanks again for reading and writing your review. I am posting chapters all the time so keep a look out!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2020 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think I'm in love with this story. You mind has quite the imagination. So many ideas in each chapter which makes me believe that this is only the beginning. I breezed through all 10 chapters and I can't wait for more!

My favorite concept is the human panty slave. Whether it's some guy transformed into a panty, or maybe a tiny guy tied up to the crotch of someone's panties, I find this fascinating. Being trapped and forced to lick a giantess's pussy all day for the rest of their life sounds pretty sexy yet terrifying. 

I saw a few elements of that with some of the characters but I'm wondering if there will be a giantess that has her complete focus on a tiny guy trapped against her crotch. Maybe it's Maxine as she mentioned that's how she treats her tinies. I don't know, but I'm excited to learn more.

I can't wait for the next chapter! (And welcome to giantess world!)



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you so much for reading!

First off, the panties idea is one of my favourites. Its one I adapt in many different ways and the newest chapter, 11, has a new idea that I hope you will enjoy.

Second, Maxine actually has her human trapped against her ass not her pussy. But there is a character that is upcoming that I am focusing on soon that sounds what you want to read. Also the Belle Twins are known to use humans in there panties, with Venessa keeping one on her whenever she has her panties on. That human she keeps is close to her and is a focus in an upcoming chapter. (Betty does not wear underwear currently, but when she is forced to, she has a human service her inside her panties, or used to). Its a common tradition for Gigerica since landing on earth between high class, continued from when they did it to lower species on thier home planet.

And finally thank you for the welcome. I have been reading for awhile now but wanted to share my story that I had been wanting to write for awhile. I am glad you have been enjoying my story and more will come. Its all planned out, just need to put ideas to typing.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Almost all of this is body modification and body horror

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love this! I would love to see the perspectives of the living objects she swaps for non living objects.



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you so much for reading. The chapter 10 might be something you will enjoy. If not, let me know where to focus on, I tried writing two POV in two different scenarios (those she leaves and those she ignores on herself). Hope you enjoy it and if you want anything else focused on or expanded on, let me know.

I have ideas for pretty much all the poor humans who are tortured in various ways, but only write those I find a way to write in or those who wish to read them. If there is a perspective you want to see, I shall find a way to include it.

 

Thanks again for reading and hope you enjoy the story as it continues.

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