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Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2021 8:25 AM Title: Tess (2)

I had lots of fun with the idea of the beads that was a great idea.

Reviewer: InscrutableDjinn Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2021 11:50 PM Title: Tess (2)

While I like some of your other stories I found this one to be a bit of a disappointment. I rather enjoyed Tess's taunting of the shrinking guy, along with her plans for him. When she caught him I was looking forward to his anticipation and fear, knowing what was in store for him and that he couldn't do anything about it. Instead she went with anal beads that filled with shit, an ending that I immediatly surmised when she took them out, knowing your styles. A dark and grisly end to be sure, but considering the initial buildup it felt like (to me) a letdown.

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2021 4:28 PM Title: Tess (2)

This chapter is one of the best stories I've read in a while

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