Reviewer: araval Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2022 7:50 PM Title: Willow

I have mixed felings about this as i come normaly to this webiste rather for sexual stuff not for emotional. 

Still i must agree that this was good emotional story it did make me cry.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2020 10:12 PM Title: Willow

Well that chapter 7 was heartbreaking, and right after the sexy but differently heartbreaking chapter 6.  Here's hoping some sort of silver lining happens to poor Willow, like maybe an owner who collects shrinkies or volunteer rescue worker?  Every now and then some light needs to shine in the dark.

 

And as for Ryan and Emily, I took a certain grim joy in watching her break down, like she put Ryan through all that torment with her absentmindedness and here is the result.  Still, it's good that she cared enough to weep for him.  I wonder if this isn't the last we've seen of Ryan.  Maybe he's tougher, or luckier, than previously thought?  Your stories have grim and brutal setting but also have a 'happy ending' of sorts.  The kind that end on a 'you thought it was over didn't you?' sort of ending.

 

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 1:26 AM Title: Willow

Well this chapter is heartbreaking. A young daughter with decades ahead of her vs a dog probably half-way through his years. Sister is a monster, mom is the opposite of a loving mother, and dad has the willpower of a potato. No future for Willow in that home, her only real chance is meeting older, wild shrinkers. I wonder why society just doesn't establish communities for the shrinkism victims. It's an entire workforce that can be productive with miniturized manufacturing and internet offices. And now that it's mutated and is starting to effect adults the percentage of the normal population will only continue to decline since decent people with morality are an oddity in this setting. Is it really so expensive to convert small warehouses into cities of millions that consume less food and energy then normal apartment complexes?

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 6:38 PM Title: Willow

Great stories, have to agree with the others last one was a little dark hope she at least finds a decent home and the family ends up getting bad karma.

Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: araval Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 5:06 PM Title: Willow

I really like many of your stories but man this one was dark.

It was well written but for me it was to dark and sad.