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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 10:54 PM Title: The Breakup Party

Love the idea for this one; a very erotic chapter and great story. I like the callous nature of the gf and the rest of the partygoers. I like the games (shrinky beer pong, shrinky truth or dare). Love the twist with Beth and then the tired and upset gf. And I thought the way in which the the ex-bf is finally dispatched is very well done. One issue I have is clothing - the shrinkies should have been forced to strip down upon getting put into the bowl.

Reviewer: InscrutableDjinn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2020 10:05 PM Title: The Breakup Party

Although I don't really go for snowballing I still enjoyed this story. I also wonder how things might've gone if he'd chosen Beth instead, or if maybe Abby had decided to fuck him first. Either way, well done.

Reviewer: Reidthemouseboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 11:54 PM Title: The Breakup Party

You know this makes me curious what would have happened if he picked Beth instead. Would we get a cuter happy ending or what

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