Date: August 14 2020 5:52 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 1)
This story hooked me from start to finish. On the one hand, it's hot how his guardian/girlfriend took him to work, forgot about him, unawarely killed him, and just tossed his unrecognized corpse out. Like "whew, it's not someone i know" toss.
On the other hand, that neglect, and betrayal of trust he had in her and how he was getting upset at her for being so forgetful, hot but also understandable. Part of me wants to see a follow up of her eventually remembering she took him to school and forgot about him, going back, and asking her students about him, growing more concerned when she can't find him. Like a sort of revenge or something.
Still, your stories are not known for being gentle and they are compelling enough that I keep coming back. :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 9:59 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 1)
Quite interesting how Emily is so easily able to forget bringing someone she knows to work and then forgetting about him completely even though she see it's an older person she killed.
I would have thought that wasn't plausible till i recenlty had someone forget a large transaction they did for over a month and a half. Had to see themsleves on a security video to realize it was them that performed the act and not someone esle. So it is definitely possible.