[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 2:34 AM Title: Tess
This is a great, very erotic chapter. I love the descriptions of the shrinkie's reactions in this one and his realization of what is happening to him.
Date: August 20 2022 2:55 PM Title: Tess
Great story and I love how Ally is turning into the psycho girlfriend that will let nothing get between her and her little man. I suppose breaking up with her isn't a option if he wants to live. I suppose sooner or later, she'll want him to move into her house so her can be with her 24x7 and no one will get between them. Can't wait to see a part 2.
Date: July 16 2022 4:58 AM Title: Tess
Another fantastic chapter.
As for what you had in mind, perhaps sand would be a good place to introduce some unaware or semi aware crushing. Since it's sand they may be compacted and crushed partially without killing them outright immediately so it's a good way to get in some great crushing descriptions while tiny person can escape with merely a few broken bones and cuts for more stories later. Perhaps he gets stepped on by a few members of her family, perhaps even his girlfriend herself, before being found. A wet foot is also easy to stick to and would represent a real challenge for the tiny to escape before they're shoved into some footwear or get crushed against an actually hard ground surface
Date: April 25 2021 1:25 AM Title: Tess
Chapter 11 with Tess and Tim was really good. I only wished that Tim could have been the one survivor so Tess would have him around for more of her twisted fun and games. There is so much more she could have done to him.
Date: November 22 2020 8:58 AM Title: Tess
It is a good work of writing, you should keep uploading. I find it interesting and I think many others do too.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2020 7:41 PM Title: Tess
Excellent wordsmithing. A vivid work of imagination!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 11:45 PM Title: Tess
I loved this chapter! Unique and in theory I'm hoping Mike survives as the toy was placed back in the drawer and perhaps began to drain...? Only an idea. Keep it up! I love everything you do!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2020 2:31 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for sharing this! A little criticsm I have is that here, you began a lot of sentences or short paragraphs with the same wird, like mike, mike, mike, mike. Thats just a tip for other work not to do, you actually didnt do it that much in previous works, and all those were awesome written.
Date: August 05 2020 8:51 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for writing this. It was a very nice job and I really enjoyed this chapter. Love to see more of Tess I had an idea for a chapter with her that follows the premise you set up here. I'd be happy to write the story and post it if you don't mind me borrowing you Shrinkism universe and the Tess character. If you prefer I don't mind submitting an outline for you to write. Just let me know however you'd like to see it.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2020 12:26 AM Title: Tess
Wow, just wow. I enjoy reading all of your work but this one was just something special. Loved how you were able to incorporate the objects that we saw in Shrinkism and show how cruel this world can be for people who shrink. I think another interesting idea would be to see the outcomes of the tinies that Allison bought in chapter 4 of Shrinkism. Keep up the great work!