Date: November 21 2020 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update great content as usual.
Ch8 Loved how Megan teased the boys and that she even felt bad for a second for eating the friend. Wonder if the reason Megan has Tod between her breast isnt just to humiliate him but so she doesnt accidently kill him.
Ch9 what a chapter. Willow going through more emotional times being left out yet again from the family. The details of Willow being handled from the sandwich makin to the end where such a ride. Poor Willow having a mother that doesnt care for her or even recognize her and a sister that hates her for almost no real reason but guess this is the norm in this world. Thinking Nina and mom wont be getting off easy this time since Dad was more adament on taking care of Willow wonder if there will be a falling out.
Date: November 12 2020 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Although I don't really go for snowballing I still enjoyed this story. I also wonder how things might've gone if he'd chosen Beth instead, or if maybe Abby had decided to fuck him first. Either way, well done.
Date: October 30 2020 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the ending so much especially the “Okay, one more time. Hey Tod, where’s Larry?” that was super hot. Who she literally didnt give a shit about Larry and was just forcing Tod kinda to forget Larry too, and hes mostly next having somg accident sooner orlater.
Date: October 27 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well that chapter 7 was heartbreaking, and right after the sexy but differently heartbreaking chapter 6. Here's hoping some sort of silver lining happens to poor Willow, like maybe an owner who collects shrinkies or volunteer rescue worker? Every now and then some light needs to shine in the dark.
And as for Ryan and Emily, I took a certain grim joy in watching her break down, like she put Ryan through all that torment with her absentmindedness and here is the result. Still, it's good that she cared enough to weep for him. I wonder if this isn't the last we've seen of Ryan. Maybe he's tougher, or luckier, than previously thought? Your stories have grim and brutal setting but also have a 'happy ending' of sorts. The kind that end on a 'you thought it was over didn't you?' sort of ending.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: October 24 2020 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well this chapter is heartbreaking. A young daughter with decades ahead of her vs a dog probably half-way through his years. Sister is a monster, mom is the opposite of a loving mother, and dad has the willpower of a potato. No future for Willow in that home, her only real chance is meeting older, wild shrinkers. I wonder why society just doesn't establish communities for the shrinkism victims. It's an entire workforce that can be productive with miniturized manufacturing and internet offices. And now that it's mutated and is starting to effect adults the percentage of the normal population will only continue to decline since decent people with morality are an oddity in this setting. Is it really so expensive to convert small warehouses into cities of millions that consume less food and energy then normal apartment complexes?
Date: October 22 2020 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Cannot say how mch I loved this chapter and the entiire idea would love to see something like this again. I could see some cruel teenage boy maybe recording stuff like that with shrunken people selling it online or something. I also loved the entire Plot twist with Rick so mean and hot!! also the condom part was hot.