Date: January 27 2021 7:18 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
Yes yes I agree with last review....I'm in love with Veronica, tall busty, and Asian mix I think u said...my dream except I imagine her 18 lol....love to see her explore her power, explore burgeoning sexuality, curiousity to what an adult male might look like naked ..... funny to have his daughter realize her dad can't help reacting as even though he is a dad he is a man...be it so small..could the girls all have their own sex Ed class at her house under the daughters rules lol ..such an amzing story. Thanks again !
Author's Response:
the girls having a sex ed class is kinda interesting lol, but i dont think itll happen for this version, ive already mapped everything out and theres way too much stuff for the last day its gonna be like 5 or 6 parts lol. but yeah ideas ideas glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2021 9:19 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
Be fun to see Veronica overpower him..... not necessarily sexual...just to show she has poer over him. Maybe holding him down until he concedes or kisses her feet or some other humiliation.
Author's Response:
yeah, ive got something like that planned in an upcoming chapter :) thanks for the review!
Date: January 22 2021 3:30 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
I still love it...I'm not into feet I'm really into boobs esp from his view...his little hands trying to hold them...her curious n using his body as a learning tool etc but hey it's ur story n I do enjoy it
Author's Response:
ah well this story isnt the best for boob lovers, that one is definitely Brother. some good teasing last chapter and more being-stuck-in-her-clothes coming in a couple more!
Date: January 22 2021 2:06 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
I love it but I really did want something to happen esp with her tall Asian mix with big tits oh man I want some breast action for Marcus....thought she be curious n use him as a training toy ...learn abt men's penis...test out her breast power over men etc etc but it's still great...thanks
Author's Response:
yeahhhhh i get that people would be disappointed but thats ok :P some pretty good foot stuff comin in next chapter or two for those who like that
[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 3:59 AM Title: Day 17: Tricks
What an interesting turn of events. I think this adds an interesting dynamic and relationship between Veronica and Marcus. Im.curious to see how it goes the next time Veroncis visits their house. I know you already used my idea once but if there was ever a character who would enjoy "innocently" teasing Marcus it would be Veronica. Maybe she shows off her thong and butt to him in some "innocent" way, maybe shes why Jessie even wanted a pair in the first place? Let me know what you think :D
Author's Response:
yeah thats pretty close to what i have planned haha, only a few more (story) days away!