Date: December 16 2020 3:57 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
I was only teasing about writing more often. Just my way of saying I love the story
Author's Response:
no i know haha its fine
Date: December 15 2020 8:43 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
I like seeing how she's so casual about her more mature clothes and how she dismisses her dad's concerns
Author's Response:
me too! thanks for the review
Date: December 15 2020 7:12 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
Oh the laundry basket was fantastic. Well done...thong mmmm...her starting to simply explain things and he has no response for..she is becoming the adult....just love this story....come on u r almost on Christmas break delight us with a chapter every other day please lol. Thanks ! I'm so excited when I see a new chapter !
Author's Response:
im already uploading twice a week when i used to do just once a week! but im glad ur excited
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 5:41 AM Title: Day 16: Thong
Hey glad my idea helped out with this chapter. I liked how embarrased he was about it and yet how nonchalant she was about the whole thing. Their relationship is really well written. Him commenting on how hes lucky he isnt smaller when he fell in, I wonder if that might play a part in a future version Haha. He thinks hes okay with his daughter wearing them.now until he accidentally walks into a room.and sees her only wearing one from behind. Hes Gemma have to quickly hide and think about what he just saw and if he should say something to her.
Author's Response:
will definitely play a part in upcoming chapter, thanks for the review!