Date: December 06 2020 10:02 PM Title: Day 14: Lenience
Story is more of a slow burn than I am usually into, but so well written I'm really into it. Im curious will there be more action coming up, like will she use her size to over power him at any point. I don't see her dominating him to be mean but could see a for his own good scenario unfold. How small will he get, will we see him hand held at any point.
Author's Response:
"Im curious will there be more action coming up"
nope no more action for the rest of the story, everything else from here on out will just be talking 😁
im kidding ofc, i actually still have one of your ideas written down and set to come up here in a few chapters (day 16 i think)
Date: December 06 2020 4:16 AM Title: Day 14: Lenience
So so good.....u can't spank me lil daddy ! Like to have seen an accidental erection that she may or may not saw which is in her wine haze.....but somehow she feels the power from not being spanked...please write as much as u can when u can ...thanks so much
Author's Response:
glad you like it, thanks for the review :)
Date: December 06 2020 12:56 AM Title: Day 14: Lenience
Another great chapter. You're really pumping then out.
I like how she was unintentionally taunting him with her much larger body now and basically showing him that she's too big to be punished like she used to
Author's Response:
It's the weekend! Part 2 took me weeks bc I was busy but I wanted to see how many I can write in a day and then stockpile them or something to release or something
I almost wanted her to be very upfront about like "you cant punish me!" but then i was like well he kinda can tho like him taking away her priviliges of riding with him, he could also take away her internet im sure, but yeah in version 2 i'll probably have her be more blunt about that.