Date: November 19 2020 2:18 PM Title: Day 13: Punishing a Giant
More please ! It's so good ! I'm a breast guy so more big boobs plz . When does someone see dad has a little erection ? I wish you wrote a chapter every other day hehehe ! Thanks for the story !
Author's Response:
yeah hopefully i'll be able to get back to it soon, takes a lot of time for me to write and ive been busy with school
[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 4:42 PM Title: Day 13: Punishing a Giant
I finished catching myself up on this. I know I haven't commented yet, so I'll be changing that as this story updates more often. For now I just want to say you have an incredibly detailed and well developed writing style. Your descriptions are spot on and paint a vivid picutre of everything that's happening. I especially love the characters, and how likeably they are. I've always loved character development, even and especially in fetish stories. I'm more invested in the actual kinks when I know and like the characters.
Your story is a slow paced one, which I can't fault you for. It's whats allowed me to like the characters in the first place. But I am itching to see what action will come of this later. Feet action has been teased, which I'm eager for. And I'm very interested in the slave tag. Now let me be clear, I love Jessie's personality, and I don't want to see her lose that. However, that's what makes her the kind of character I want to see be served by others. The gentle and graceful Queen. Someone who smiles down on her tiny subjects as they kiss her feet and pats them on the head and tells them good job. I don't know if that's what you have planned for her and her dad, but you have it set up perfectly for that outcome.
But in the end it's your story, and you need to write it to be the way that you want it to be. I know there's a few stories of mine I wish I could go back and redo, but they are what they are, and I've only learned from it. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what becomes of Jessie and her dad by the end of this.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for all the kind words! they really mean a lot :)
Date: November 09 2020 9:18 AM Title: Day 13: Punishing a Giant
Great new chapter. Loved how she fantasized about him being alot smaller and treating him like a pet. Can't wait to see why she's upset and how she acts towards him
Author's Response:
thanks! and i appreciate all the reviews you've given :)
[Report This]Date: November 09 2020 7:11 AM Title: Day 13: Punishing a Giant
The birth of a Queen
Author's Response:
marcus is definitely gonna make some important realizations in the next couple days! but im not entirely throwing away jessie's friendly personality from before :P