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Reviewer: Lil-Robby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2020 6:26 AM Title: Day 5: The First Guest

Amazing story so far! I LOVE the subtle incremental role reversal, the "slow burn" so to say, especially with a gentle giantess. Jessie is so sweet, and I find having her not try to abuse her considerable power over her dad makes her feel more mature/wise, which ironically makes her feel even more dominant over her ailing father in the grand scheme of things.

The way Marcus so easily accepts his daughters suggestions, and how he earnestly, and a little desperately, seeks her approval after cleaning the kitchen or making breakfast, hints at a deeply submissive, desperate to please side of him I'm looking forward to being explored.

And I love how no-one feels toxic or hurt about the whole scenario. I find it feels a lot more sincere when the power dynamic switches naturally, like Jessie isn't trying to usurp her dear father, but due to her care for him combined with his slowly unfolding submissive nature, she must accept a maternal role regarding her father, while he follows a more obedient and humble role in their relationship.

All in all, great story, so much potential, is my personal favorite between the two "How to train" series, but I can wait for the other to finish. Keep up the awsome writing!



Author's Response:

its so gratifying when i see comments like this :))) u pretty much are getting out of it EXACTLY what im trying to portray, thats what i want both characters to seem like and im glad thats coming across without me needing to explicitly say it. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 8:49 AM Title: Day 5: The First Guest

Quite the cliffhanger there



Author's Response:

multiple sleepovers and parties and friend visits incoming over the next few weeks!

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