[Report This]Date: June 21 2021 8:52 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Yeah you know, I think even tho this is a kinky story on a kinky site there is Always space for support and confort. Covid is there claiming countless lives, many social and economic issues... so its nice to have such a cozy and inviting story, even if it is fetish related. I even think it adds to the overall enjoiment lol. Hopefully it wasn't too weird what I said kkkkkkkk. But as always very nice work 💚
Author's Response:
no i totally get what you mean, i always like the chapters i write sometimes that make me smile and i know some people need something to help them "get away"
[Report This]Date: June 19 2021 7:07 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
What an adventure this has been. I'm glad I found this story so early and could follow it through as you write. This final chapter was really lovely! Can't believe its finished (for now). BUT Im even more excited for the version 2!! Thanks for this great reading, specially on these dificult times we're living!
Author's Response:
lol weirdly heartwarming at the end there but you're welcome!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2021 3:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
And the king/queen returns! And the last chapter was... intense! What a blast! I particulary love when you give little hints (at least I think they are) forshadowing Marcus further shrink on version 2, like when Jessie says shes not an giant next to him, or on another one when she says he was not THAT small to tackle her, etc. Not sure if it is on purpose but I Love it and caaaaan't wait for him to get smaller next to her!
Now for this chap, intense like I said. Though liking her feet was something we see on almost every story, for me that felt more fullfiling because we had a build up for it. Marcus from chapter one would never do this IMO, but accomponyng this story since the begining, it felt pretty natural. Also would like to say that generally I don't like multiple giantesses on these stories. BUT Jessies friends all have such distinct personalites and interactions with Marcus and with each other and for once I enjoyed a story like this with other giantesses. Your character development is top notch. And I'm a big fan since the first chapter. Can't wait to see how this version of the story ends S2
Author's Response:
thank you for the very thorough review. yeah that kind of foreshadowy type of writing is definitely intentional. and i know what you mean about multiple giants sometimes blending in so yeah making sure they had distinct personalities was definitely important for me, and hopefully i'll be able to build on the personalities of some of the side characters like harper and camila next version.
Date: June 09 2021 7:46 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
"its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too"
We are dying to read it already! The anticipation between chapters kills us! :)
Author's Response:
glad you're excited! you might be the story's biggest fan lol
Date: June 09 2021 2:36 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
"well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!"
Is version 2 an alternate story line, or a continuation? We are totally sucked into this story, and several others from you. Thank you for sharing
Author's Response:
its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too
Date: June 09 2021 1:11 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
As you promised! Another amazing chapter..... Hate even thinking the story is almost over! Love to see how it plays out now that she has photos of him kissing, licking and sucking their toes!
Author's Response:
well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!
Date: June 06 2021 9:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha
OMG we can't wait!
Author's Response:
soon!
Date: June 05 2021 12:51 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
PLEASE update this soon! Suspense is killing us! :)
Author's Response:
i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha
Date: May 17 2021 3:15 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Seems like she is manipulating him more and more towards total submission to her, her feet, and that of her friends. Still loving it...can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: April 25 2021 2:55 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Also.... meant to add....LOVE how she held his mouth shut and told him to listen!
and yes I do understand you are catering to differnt tastes..... not a problem, we love the foot stuff..... but no wrroes, you are doing great.....
Author's Response:
i loved that bit too! subtle lil display of power
Date: April 24 2021 5:54 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Amazing! Best chapter yet......having him submitt (almost totally) to their feet,and be treated and labeled as a pet.....great stuff.....Can't wait to see that progression!
Oh and as far as I am concerned, you can't overdo the foot stuff....
Well done, as always!
Author's Response:
i know there are loyal foot fans but i also wanna make sure i do stuff for other people too :P but yeah dont worry i know the foot fandom here is big so i usually have lots of that to go around for u guys haha. thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2021 6:50 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
LOVED every single word of this! Specially the ending, when she said that was her pet. It was not forced, felt really nice! Congrats!
Also cant wait for version 2! Are you still planning on that? Reaaaaally wanted to see him smaller, and maybe that scene where she gives him a massage that we talked about.
10/10 as always
Author's Response:
yep, still planning that! i liked the ending too, these last 3 chapters i think have had pretty great endings but this whole final day in particular is just the culmination of everything worked up between the two of them for so many months of writing so im glad its coming together well
Date: April 17 2021 3:51 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I LOVE how she got him to serve her feet in front of her friends, the fact that he had to smell them and rub them. He may start to associate doing this with pleasing her, and find it satisfies him to be literally at her feet when she demends it.
All in all, he is sllowly falling into submission.... love it :)
Author's Response:
glad you liked it :)
Date: April 09 2021 3:45 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I seriously didn't think it was the ending, I mean why would you end it on a dream? lol.... its just his fears of how he may end up.
Will he serve he more and more, increasingly? Will he shrink even more? Become more dependant on her? Will he need to be at her mercy? Living to please her and her feet as he becomes smaller possibly, or more under her spell?
We will find out!
Always looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you're enjoying!
Date: April 02 2021 1:17 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love this chapter, she is getting a little more demanding, insisting that he tell her all he heard the boys say about her.
He is clearly becoming more attached to her feet, the instrument she may use to further subjucate him perhaps?? She seems to sense this.
Well done :)
Author's Response:
thank you! and thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 10:55 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Loved the last chapter!! Since she is already washed up and clean, maybe she would return the favor from her dad and massage him just like he did to her? This includes some massage with her feet of course 🙃🙃. It would be nice to see her doing this, speacially because he conforted her too. He seens to like her smell now that she took a shower. So maybe is in character to him liking the Idea.
Another suggestion that I have is, if this happens, it would be really cool to see him enjoing a little bit. He's always so tense and all, maybe this massage would make him open up a bit more, just like Jessie REALLY opened up when he was doing her massage
Just an suggestion anyway! 😊 thanks again for this amazing work
Author's Response:
her massaging him is a good idea! i think someone suggested that at one point but idk why i never went thru with it. theres not really enough time for me to add it to this version tho since there's only one "day" left and its halfway written and fully mapped out, but i can add it for v2!
thanks for the review :)
Date: March 13 2021 2:52 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Another awesome chapter! Love how she is subjucating him to her feet, and then using them to slowly take him over. Seems he is aquiring a taste for her feet as well while he falls more and more under their spell, and hers. Her emerging dominance is subtle, but progressing nicely. Well done!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, glad you liked it :)
[Report This]Date: March 04 2021 10:17 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Simply loved the last chapter. So caring, so sweet and intimate. Can't wait to see the version of this scene when he's smaller tho ^^
But yeah, your writting is really good, specially for the pace you take to do another chapter. And the fact you take your readers considerations and wishes is just sweet.
And like someone already said here, I would Love to see a "How to Train Your Son" story. Unfortunally there is a lack of intimate and gentle ish stories like you write between family members on this community. If you ever gonna do a how to train your son, there is an SUPERB story here called "Origins of a foot fetish". I may have said on another comment. Sadly it is unfinished, but could be an really cool inspiration since it is really similar to your content here.
Well, thats it. 10/10 as Always!
Author's Response:
ive thought about it but i also wanna branch out a lil bit more. other stories aside from this series and format and other subjects besides a family member. so yeah i have an idea for one but i cant say i'd be getting to it anytime soon. but thanks you for all the kind words :)
Date: March 03 2021 3:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love the lastest chapter...... I love how she is starting to seemingly take care of him more and steer him to do things to satisfy her needs. I also love that he is still obsessed with remembering his time at her feet, she certainly knew how to use them to subjucate him, and I think he may be starting to like it. Thanks again for sharing!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: March 02 2021 11:34 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
So, I finally got caught up with this one. You write at an incredible rate for the quality shown.
Wasn't expecting to love this story as much as I do. Daughter/dad dynamic isn't one seen too often but you pull it off very well!
All the foot content so far has been golden, with the sock smelling and the wrestling being a real highlight for sure.
Also, I was wondering, will we see Jessie getting tickling revenge on her dad at any point? He's tickled her a few times and she's shown remarkable restraint in not getting payback haha. He'd be unable to stop her at his size, and she could tickle him until he's willing to do just about anything. ;)
Excited to read more, honestly curious to see how this one is going to end. I'll be keeping an eye out for the Roommate installment of this serious for sure, and I hope to see a 'How to Train your Son' one day!
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you liked it! yeah it helps that i havent been like super busy this past year so ive been able to write pretty regularly.
tickling isnt something i think i even thought of lol. i dont even remember him tickling her but if you say i did then i guess i did shkshshksh but yeah i pretty much already have everything written except for the last day so maybe i'll squeeze it into those chapters but if not i've written it down to add for version 2!