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Reviewer: BitBitcoin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is easily the best story I've read in a long time, you're a very good writer!, I agree with one of the other revies, a escape or rebellion attempt would be very interesting, even more with the contrast with the cult around her.

Reviewer: Theantimonitor Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far. You are a great writer. I would hate to be a speck sized person. I think it would be a nightmare if she would drop dust sized people between her gigantic buttocks. I hope some of the people try to escape her house and find a way back to liliput. How tall is the woman in this story?

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thanks! The brob woman is around 15,000 feet tall compared to the lillis. Each race is about 50x taller than the last. So to a six foot tall lilli a Gulliveran is 300 ft and a brob is 15,000.

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2020 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't believe I forgot to rate! Also very excited to hear more is coming!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate it

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was really really great. It's not often I am happy with a story's ending but you absolutly nailed it. Perfect build up to a perfect satisfying end. Props to you! Loved it from beggining to end



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's not over yet though. More coming soon :)

If you don't mind, could you please leave a star review? I think it helps stories get more traffic.

Reviewer: Undeafeated Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2020 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Are you going to finish this story?



Author's Response:

I just added a new chapter!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2020 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great start to this story. 

And a nice cliffhanger ending. Can't wait to see what happens (and if any of them will survive Clare's playtime)

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