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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2020 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Yuan Gu's feet, and delivery to the enemy

Wait until his mom hears what he just did, or until everyone realizes he only said no that ONE time... on the other hand, it's finally time for hte Amazing Amber!



Author's Response:

Hehe everyone has their limits... Brett has desires but he has been through the ringer today and I have to be realistic at some point - he's just tired and worn out.

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2020 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Yuan Gu's feet, and delivery to the enemy

Yes!!!! 

I was hoping for an update on this story and you did not dissapoint.

Wow ok ,so I loved his time under Yuan's feet. The difference between hers, being rough athlete + mature feet was a great combination. I loved how you described them as being like rough construction paper with smelly weights.

Her feet definitely are tough, the description of their texture, their smell and sweat was really hot. 

I also loved her dominant attitude and control over Brett. (The backstory with her and Wendy was a nice touch too)

I wouldn't mind seeing more of Yuan, it also is a great precedent of her making her son watch Brett, she definitely has her eyes set on him 'honoring' her feet in future. 

Nice seeing Loren again :D It's great that she's still looking out for Brett (and I still love their relationship, and where it could go in future)

But damn! The egotistical bitch the Amoral Amber (Yes, I know what it is XD) is back.

Wendy.....really, you just handed him over to the girl. (sighs)

Whatever the circumstances, I know Brett is probably going to have a detour on his way home. 

Another fantastic chapter, keep up the great work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! The pace has slowed a lot since I've just moved house and had way too many home projects to undertake, but I can do a bit of writing on the weekends now.

You may be quite assured that when I finish this I willl mark it completed, I don't like to abandon stories randomly.

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