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Reviewer: Ombligo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2020 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gates of Hell

Even though this story isn't 100% my personal cup of tea, mad respect for listing the chapter tags at the top of each entry. Best practice I wish more folks would observe. And you've got a good, tight style to your prose. Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Ya it was always a pet peeve of mine.  We are all on here for the same reason and chapter tags really help out ;)

Reviewer: GentleGTSVore Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2020 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gates of Hell

I like the setup so far. Eager to see where you take the story! Although I find some of the language over the top, I think it kind of fits into your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope chapter 2 satisfies some of that eagerness. 

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