Reviews For Fooling Around
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Reviewer: GTSBill Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2020 3:20 PM Title: Fooling Around

Poor guy! I really enjoyed this story. It's always rough to be accused of something you didn't do, but this takes it to another level! I like the idea of "mistaken revenge", really makes you feel for the tiny guy. I just wish it had been longer because I would have loved to see his wife draw out his torture some more, but I enjoyed it regardless.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2020 11:37 AM Title: Fooling Around

Really liked this one.  Short but sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I like writing nice little self-contained stories.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2020 10:17 AM Title: Fooling Around

She seems pretty eager to crush him. I think she planned this all along and was just looking for an excuse.

 

Thx for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

On the scale of things I've heard people do to get out of unhappy marriages, this is solidly in the middle.

You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!

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