Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2023 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

A world where all women are huge and sexy is wondeful!!

Reviewer: jx59syun Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I've seen this series in the Most Recent section a few times lately, but I hadn't realized that it wasn't a reupload of the the first two versions of it that I've read and enjoyed. I'm really glad that I clicked this one open because in those previous two iterations, I was curious about the prospect of focusing more on Timmy's relationship with the girls as opposed to Beatrice and Maia. Specifically, expanding from their patented humilation to something more sensuous between the girls and him and this delivers wonderfully in that regard. Their touch is just gentle enough here even when they're pushing. Their words land with just the right amount of ownership to leaven the humilation. Timmy isn't going anywhere; he's going to be trailing behing Clare's widening wake, living well off of her crumbs and feeling smaller with each passing second. The girls each feel more distinguishable, particularly Clare and Katie, than in their previous appearances even with the relative brevity of this fic. Should you decide to return to this one again, I'm curious if we'll see more of Ashley because her quiet nature makes me wonder how she might go about occupying more of Timmy's and the reader's attention. This one ends for me with the feeling that the girls, Clare in particular, have taken precedence over Beatrice, justifiably having done so by virtue of their deeper connection with our meek protagonist. 

I like to have something nice to say for every piece I read, often to complement a writer on their improving skills, but this was a rare and happy surprise to read something from a writer that I already considered to be uncommonly skilled and to see that they've become even more so. I've read most of your publically available work and they do lean harsher than this, a little less to my tastes, so I will cop to that bias, but I sincerely believe that I liked this one so much because you did it so well! I don't like seeing readers of erotica reviewing works strictly in light of their own taste and encouraging writers to abandon their own, so please accept that regardless of wherever else your writing leads you, I hope to see that it keeps getting better and I intend to read as much of it as I can get a hold of! Once again, I am satisfied with my decision to click for what I thought was a re read. 

 

Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed!