Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2020 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

You've set up a fantastic scenario that has lots of options for intense erotica and storytelling. Thank you for sharing this story. =)

I think the one element tbat could spice it up even more would be for one of the 3 giantesses (aunts or mom) to be a little less friendly and lead to them exploring the darker aspects of their personalities. Nothing gruesome, but simply psychological domination and/or "evil" teasing. Perhaps the scientists discover what caused the shrinking, and it could be replicated (but would the aunts push it too far in their quest for true goddesshood?). Or they lure the mom or girlfriend into their fantasies, and make him feel so incredibly small and powerless that it manifests itself in further shrinking. I'm eager to see where you take the characters going forward.

Small note, but personally, anything involving toilets, watersports, etc is a massive turnoff and prompts me to skip entire sections. It's your story of course so write what appeals to you, but figured I'd mention it. Cheers!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2020 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oof! I got confused that I thought the first part was a flashback on how he got shrunk. But it got even better.

Anyways, finally Bonnie appears! Finally we have 2 wonderful aunts to play with their even shrunken nephew. And finally yes, he shrunk ever further!

Btw, what's wrong with these aunts!? Whey are they so perfect!? I think Doug might be the luckiest nephew ever. Does he have any other aunts or sisters than can join in the harem? Hahah kidding

Hmm.. I thought the foot sandwich would appear here where Doug is in between Nikki's and Bonnie's feet but was done individually. Still ok though but still love to see it

Would definitely love to see both aunts make love with each other with Doug always in between in those chaos such as dual footjob/toejobs, french kising while he's inside their mouths, or using him as a human dildo at the same time. Incest is not a taboo for them anyways.

Anyways, I love there are more foot and foot odor focused in this chapter. Keep it up. And that watersports tease killed me. I thought both of them were gonna make him drink their pee or shower him with their pee. I was disappointed a little but it's cool. As much as I Iove foot focus, will there be some armpit actions also?

Will Doug shrink even more? Not that I'm complaining about his new size but I think it's already the perfect size for his aunts' usage.

Excellent writing as always especially on the foot scenes. Every part was a fun ride like I'm also in Doug's position. I would love to read more chapters of this story and maybe some your future stories. For me, this might be the best  gts story for this year! 

Thanks as always for this another excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next. Hope it will be extremely wild.