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Date: August 01 2008 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A new person on the scene.

Now, that's what I call a twist ending!

I was half-afraid it was going to be the cliche' where the installer happened to be a woman (which, even today is still a mostly-male field), who kidnaps the little man out of instant lust.

Thanks for proving me wrong. :-)

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Date: April 14 2008 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

Uhm! Is this chapter 2-b? Or, not 2-b?

Author's Response: Ha!
rnI thought I was editing the chapter, and then I found that not only was I not permitted to edit, the engine decided that I was entering a new chapter. I've aksed Jacen Solo to fix my error.

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Date: April 14 2008 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Going Deeper.

One word: Wow!!!!!

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Date: April 07 2008 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

For some reason, I picture Pamela Lee Anderson as Karen. Nice going!

Author's Response: Ha! Well, I omitted any reference to what Karen looks like. I want you to imagine an image that you want to see, rather than impose the physical image I want to see. Now, in the upcoming installment there is a slight reference, but nothing that should dash things too much for you.rnThank you for your review.

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