[Report This]Date: August 26 2020 5:00 PM Title: Blow
Wow. The imagry in this story is amazing. It really paints a picture with great disassociation post-size change. Absolutely one of my favorite short stories on the site. Strong work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Always great to hear from satisfied readers.
Date: June 04 2020 11:48 PM Title: Blow
Good story so far keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks! This story is quite done, but I have others coming.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2020 6:53 PM Title: Blow
very interesint idea, I am a huge fan of dark cruel plots and unfairness combined with unaware. I would really like to see him find a horrible death in this plot by some unaware character and hes maybe lost living the life as a tiny parasite or bug.
Author's Response:
Thanks! He is quite dead by now, though, so someone else will have to live those fates.
Date: June 02 2020 5:04 PM Title: Blow
Remarkable well written story.
To bad you did not write more about his experience up her nose before he was absorbed, as there are not a lot of nose stories, almost none actually, on this site. It seems just about every bodily function of a woman is addressed here, except for a woman's snot. Disgusting as that may be, in real life some women can be quite playful with their nose pickings.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I've seen a lot of stuff, but not a lot of nose stuff, true. However, I wanted to focus on the possibility of using the nose as a way to kill a very small person, and not focus on the snot. As you mention it's disgusting, and to me it's not particularly enticing.