[Report This]Date: June 29 2020 5:03 AM Title: Dinner Delight
Wow, this was just amusing! I expected the woman to not know about the tinies she was eating, but in the end she's very aware of them, she just made it to them!
Very nice!
Author's Response:
Thank you! She wanted a bit of protein with her rice and went with the most abundant source for her.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2020 5:25 AM Title: Dinner Delight
This was good! Particularly enjoyed the bit where he was trying to hide under her plate. I think being dwarfed by simple objects like plates, cups, and utensils really hammers home the size difference and makes the tiny feel like just another item on the menu.
That said, would have preferred for him to have climbed a mountain of fried rice, or maybe seaweed salad or something. Maybe next time? ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Good rice is sticky, though, and is more than enough to keep him from moving. Don't know why he'd climb onto a pile of rice, so he's got to be put there.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2020 3:08 PM Title: Dinner Delight
What an evil girl. I bet this is the type of girl that gets like tons of money from her parents to study and didn't have to work hard for it at all. Unbearable people.
And that's to her shrinking powers, she will even go unopposed. I hope she choked on that tiny man!
Thank you for writing and until next time.
Author's Response:
I regret to inform you that instead of choking on him she's been featured in other stories where she also eats tiny men. Not a lot you can do to stop someone like her!
And thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2020 2:57 AM Title: Dinner Delight
Great single chapter story
Author's Response:
Thank you!