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Reviewer: heyitsme123123 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2020 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, love your work. Hope to see more from you in the future!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Ebb Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

i would strongly reccommend the use of paragraphs to break up the large chunks of text in this story & divide ideas.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

As it is my first story so is it story good enough to be read?

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