Date: May 15 2020 5:20 PM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Great story, the characters felt genuine and the way you wrote the last chapter was astounding. Also nice to see some representation, helps to keep things fresh. I realise this project is probably dead, I'm just here to pay my respects.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 5:23 PM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Nice story you have here, like the interactions between characters. I only don’t understand why hebe is called ‘they’ as it was confusing at first.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Hebe is nonbinary, and their pronouns are they/them. I haven't seen any nonbinary representation in pretty much any G/t media, so I opted to give it a shot. I understand it can be confusing at first, but I'm doing my best to make it easy to distinguish, and I think it will get easier as you get used to it.
There will also be chapters that explore Hebe's identity more in-depth in the future that might clear things up, though I don't know exactly where or when I want it to happen yet.
Date: April 19 2020 1:38 AM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Good start so far. This is one of my favorite sub-genres, a naturally tiny person trying to live their life. The non-binary protagonist is a unique touch. I'm interested to see where this goes.