Date: December 15 2022 7:33 PM Title: The First Mistake
Very well written, great story. We can see Matt's evolution from unbelieving to disgust to frustration to helplessness to accepting his fate and finally to begin to enjoy his fate. IMO though, a tiny would eventually wear out and become less of a person over time, becoming numb to his existence, a vegetable if you will. Perhaps that could be Matt's final progression. In that case, he wouldn't serve a purpose and his sister would have to find a new tiny for her fun. I imagine she would simply update his settings to a non-tough 2 inches and swallow him down. Just a thought.
Date: September 27 2021 3:23 AM Title: The First Mistake
Extraordinary story. Powerfully descriptive and erotic. A real inspiration.
Date: June 19 2021 9:57 PM Title: The First Mistake
This Is by far my favourite story That ive read on this site, ive read it back to front multiple times and it even inspired me to start writing my story. i am sad to see it come to an end but all good things must end at some point. i cant wait to see what you write next
Date: January 19 2021 1:03 PM Title: The First Mistake
This is my favorite story of all time in the fetsh space, so really was happy to see another chapter. I get so excited whenever I see an add to this, One Shot City or Tiny Tinder Testimonials. I really liked the evolution of the relationship here, where it's a willing thing and he gets to still live a semblance of life, I think you struck a perfect balance with what it needed.
Date: December 29 2020 7:22 AM Title: The First Mistake
alright im going to leave some ideas bellow as this is my favourite story
1. a what if chappter. as mentioned taylor said if it was not her it would be the next girl maybe we can see who the next girl is
2. taylor loses matthew eiether at work or back at home
3. taylor might start and only fans or join the adult indistruy and force matthew to be part of it
4. taylor is also shrunk for a short time with matthew
5. while visiting home matthew can be found my another family member adn used thinking its other a toy or some random guy people who mioght use him can be (Mom Aunt cousin ext)
i may update or add another coment later with more ideas
Date: July 21 2020 4:47 AM Title: The First Mistake
Hi i wanted to say how much i love this story ive been a geust on this site for a year or 2 maybe but ive never made an account and i have to say that this story is amazing and i cant wait to find out what happens next as its my favourite story on here so thank you very much for making it
Date: June 12 2020 1:44 AM Title: The First Mistake
It's really beyond my imagination.. so great!! Encounters with other man are not my type but everything else so good. You're truly a talented writer
Date: May 29 2020 6:31 AM Title: The First Mistake
These are amazing, I hope it continues.
Date: April 10 2020 9:15 PM Title: The First Mistake
After almost 20 years of browsing this site, I am creating an account just to write a review for this story. It is amazing and I do hope you continue it.
Date: April 10 2020 2:49 AM Title: The First Mistake
I loved the cameos of Cat from the story I commissioned with you! Awesome to see it become part of your world
Author's Response:
Thanks! I debated connecting things due to considerations between established canon, shrinking rules, in-universe societal standards, accidentally creating plot holes and.....then I realized I'm writing hella fun sex stories.
Date: April 09 2020 5:08 PM Title: The First Mistake
You're currently the best writer on this site, hands down.