Reviewer: Beetlebomb Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2020 10:49 PM Title: Timothy is a Beta

I've followed your writing for quite some time, Joyce. I have to say this story in particular really hits home with me more than any others that you have written. 

 

The humiliation aspect is perfectly well executed. It's similar to Jeff Stintim's humiliation except you also introduce the women growing and, best of all, beautification. You have entered the realm of what many other giantess writers have touched upon, which is notion of the women becoming so incredibly attractive that they hinder the male protagonist in some way. Your comments about even their voices sounding sexier had resonated with me.

 

I check out your patreon page shortly after reading this and was disappointed to see no other stories resembled this humiliation + slow-growth gts + SM + beautification angle. I'm crossing my fingers that you plan on working on either a sequel to this or a future story in this genre.

 

Regardless, as a long time reader and writer, this is easily in my top 5 stories of all times. Thank you for sharing this amazing work.

 

If I may, I highly recommend you read "Cradle in the South" by Moose on giantess city. His story is similar to this and contains many nuances that I believe you would appreciate! 

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 8:36 PM Title: Not Really A Man Anymore

This is a great story, but I do have one question.  Wasn't part of Timmy's wish "And I want a girl...a girlfriend...a girlfriend that's hot and sexy and understands and...and, uh, appreciates this fetish as much as I do.  I want that, goddess...I want it so much!"?

Wouldn't that mean that Beatrice knows full well that it's humiliation and domination that causes Timmy to shrink, and that he both wants and needs it?  In other words, doesn't Beatrice know everything about Timmy's shrinking caused by being humilated and dominated by her and other women, and their beautification for doing this to him?

Can't wait to read what Maia ultimately does with Timmy.  Will he simply vanish into nothingness like the caterpillar, or will he be shrunk down to the size Beatrice desires most of him?

Author's Response:

I think maybe the point here is that Beatrice understands his fetish even better than he does.  Timothy is into humiliation, yes -- but he had no idea how into it he was.  He could have never imagined the extent of what was going to happen to him, but Beatrice always could.  i think that's why the story's called "Is This What You REALLY Want?" ;) 

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2020 3:49 PM Title: Timothy is a Beta

You've got my full attention sir!

Author's Response:

Haha, glad you like it so far! <3 

Reviewer: JustForTribute Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2020 5:31 PM Title: Maia, The Goddess of Growth and Decay

Loving the stories Joyce, Keep it up! :)

You handle divine powers much better than I do!

Kind Regards - JFT

Author's Response:

Haha, so glad you're enjoying the stories! <3 <3 

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2020 5:53 PM Title: Timothy is a Beta

I think this is great! Really excited to see what halppens next!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much zbh!  Glad you're enjoying it! Lots more to come <3 <3