[Report This]Date: August 05 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Little Beginning
Sad to know this is going to be a short ride, but happy to see you back again.
Not much to say with just one chapter, only that your writing is still as great as I remember. I just love how you describe the scenes and actions, specially the foot related ones.
As always, thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
This story may be a somewhat short ride, but I’ve got LOTS of stories lined up for the future: some short, some long, and some in between. In fact, I’ve got outlines drawn up for 3 other novel–length stories, as well as several novellas, and about a dozen short, single-chapter stories, including a sequel to my short story “Honey, Don’t Squish Me!”, so even when THIS story is finished, I’ll still be writing others.
With this story, as with my other multi-chapter stories moving forward, I wanted to get most of the story written and be almost done before I started posting chapters. That way, I can post at least one chapter a week without missing. I’m still fleshing out the ending of the story, though, so if you have any suggestions, just let me know.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2020 8:44 AM Title: Forward
I'm really enjoying this so far! I thoroughly enjoyed your other husband-wife story so I can't wait to see where this one goes, especially when the power balance between the two begins to shift. It'll be interesting to see if Cassie remains mostly playful or if she becomes more dominant as time goes on.
Author's Response:
Well, I’m glad you’re enjoying it! I do like the husband and wife dynamic, as it can be taken in several directions. I certainly don’t want to spoil anything, but what I CAN tell you is that Cassie and Nick love each other, and that she would never do anything to intentionally hurt him; although, there is certainly the possibility that she might become a little TOO playful.
Anyway, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2020 10:18 PM Title: Forward
Interest take on shrink method. Definately how real people would get themsleves in trouble.
Author's Response:
I actually thought long and hard about if this particular shrinking method would work in the type of story I’m writing, but I think I’ve found a narrative that will make it work while still setting up the scenes I want. I hope you like the finished product.